One, Two, Three
60 word dash story35 total reviews
Comment from Cajungirl
Hahahaha, so many can relate to this one, two, three process. This is an excellent story. Great job with the writing prompt. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Hahahaha, so many can relate to this one, two, three process. This is an excellent story. Great job with the writing prompt. Best of luck.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Thank you, cajungirl, for your kind review and comments for my dash story. I appreciate your taking the time to read and shRe your thoughts. Congratulations again for the win.
Smiles,
Indy :-)
Comment from alf collier
Hi to the unknown author. All that was missing was the tooth fairy!! Loved the story, a whole tale told so well in so few words, alf
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Hi to the unknown author. All that was missing was the tooth fairy!! Loved the story, a whole tale told so well in so few words, alf
Comment Written 17-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your great review and comments for my dash story, alf. My brother did this door knob thing because he wanted the money from the tooth fairy. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.
Smiles,
Indy :-)
Comment from 4hisglory
Oh my gosh! Reminds me of my dad. He pulled all our teeth ( 5 kids) when we were kids. Never went to a dentist.
I suggest you change the first line. Told himself in the mirror, doesn't quite make sense, even though we know what you mean. Maybe - 'said Jake, looking in the mirror'.
Good entry for the contest. Blessings, LaVonne
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Oh my gosh! Reminds me of my dad. He pulled all our teeth ( 5 kids) when we were kids. Never went to a dentist.
I suggest you change the first line. Told himself in the mirror, doesn't quite make sense, even though we know what you mean. Maybe - 'said Jake, looking in the mirror'.
Good entry for the contest. Blessings, LaVonne
Comment Written 16-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to read my micro story, LaVonne. I appreciate your kind review and comments, and thank you for your great suggestion. I'm glad you enjoyed and thanks for your good luck wish for the contest.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
LOL... A right of pathage for thure.
This was a super fun read. Good job. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Hi,
LOL... A right of pathage for thure.
This was a super fun read. Good job. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 16-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Thank you, Jax, for your great review and comments for my micro story. I appreciate your taking the time to read and for your good luck wish in the contest. Thanks!
Comment from Spitfire
Good one! The obvious is to think he's planning to kill himself. Tying the knots leads to visions of hanging. Perfect ending with "Yeth" instead of yes. I'm impressed.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
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Good one! The obvious is to think he's planning to kill himself. Tying the knots leads to visions of hanging. Perfect ending with "Yeth" instead of yes. I'm impressed.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your great review and comments for my micro story, Shari. I'm glad you enjoyed the misdirection, and thanks for taking the time to read and share your thoughts.
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I should have known it was a top-notch writing. :-)
Comment from JM
LOL This reminded me of something the Three Stooges would do. I am still laughing at the last line: "Yeth! I did it!" I was thoroughly entertained . Bravo!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
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LOL This reminded me of something the Three Stooges would do. I am still laughing at the last line: "Yeth! I did it!" I was thoroughly entertained . Bravo!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
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Wow! I'm so thrilled you enjoyed the micro story, JM. I appreciate your wonderful review and generous rating, and thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I enjoy writing for these micro word contests, so I'm delighted you liked it. They are so challenging!
Comment from lancellot
I knew it as soon as I seen the door. This is old school. Back in the day we would face a door before the dentist. A great tale and it brings back memories of a sillier time. Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
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I knew it as soon as I seen the door. This is old school. Back in the day we would face a door before the dentist. A great tale and it brings back memories of a sillier time. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your great review and comments for my micro story, Lancellot. My brother did this once because he wanted the quarter from the tooth fairy. Thanks for reading!
Comment from Judy Couch
This is a good description of a common experience. A lot of kids try this and it seems to beat waiting for the tooth to come out on its own.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
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This is a good description of a common experience. A lot of kids try this and it seems to beat waiting for the tooth to come out on its own.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
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Thank you for this great review, Judy. I appreciate so much your kind words, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the micro story. Thanks for reading!
Comment from Dawn Munro
LOL - ouch. Yep, heard that works, but building up the courage would take me so long the tooth would fall out before I was ready. What a cute little story, and perfectly presented. Good luck!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
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LOL - ouch. Yep, heard that works, but building up the courage would take me so long the tooth would fall out before I was ready. What a cute little story, and perfectly presented. Good luck!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your great review and comments, Dawn. I'm delighted you enjoyed this micro story, and thank you for your kind good luck wish for the contest. Thanks for reading.
Comment from forestport12
Very cute! It was no surprise, but it was a delightful, fun-filled read. Yeth, I liked it very much. I like how you saved the best for last, the quote of how he felt. Excellent and good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
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Very cute! It was no surprise, but it was a delightful, fun-filled read. Yeth, I liked it very much. I like how you saved the best for last, the quote of how he felt. Excellent and good luck.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your kind review and comments for this micro story, Stan. I'm delighted you liked it elven though you weren't surprised. lol. Thanks for reading and for your good luck wish in the contest.
