Her Last Kiss
A little fun in 60 words13 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
great pairing of illustration and emotionally-charged story
it's difficult to make a story this dramatic in so few words - this one packs a real punch
Brooke
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great pairing of illustration and emotionally-charged story
it's difficult to make a story this dramatic in so few words - this one packs a real punch
Brooke
Comment Written 15-Mar-2015
Comment from BeasPeas
Very interesting, unique. Fodder for another, longer tale perhaps? Excellent word choices, especially in the first sentence. Intriguing image to accompany.
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Very interesting, unique. Fodder for another, longer tale perhaps? Excellent word choices, especially in the first sentence. Intriguing image to accompany.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2015
Comment from TAB_that's me
This isn't my favorite subject matter but it is well written. I saw no spag. Good luck to you in the contest.
~~Teresa~~
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This isn't my favorite subject matter but it is well written. I saw no spag. Good luck to you in the contest.
~~Teresa~~
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2015
