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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "He Leads Me"poems inspired by Psalm 23
35 total reviews
Comment from Nosha17
Such an important message to never let our faith waver for the Lord will always be there to protect us. Good biblical content and excellent rhyming. I liked the poetic form, good rhythm. Faye
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Such an important message to never let our faith waver for the Lord will always be there to protect us. Good biblical content and excellent rhyming. I liked the poetic form, good rhythm. Faye
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind comments about the writing and the message, Faye. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Debi - I am not great on sonnets so can't help you there, but this read wonderfully aloud for me and your rhyme is solid. Overall a well penned work I enjoyed reading it, very expressive.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2015
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Dear Debi - I am not great on sonnets so can't help you there, but this read wonderfully aloud for me and your rhyme is solid. Overall a well penned work I enjoyed reading it, very expressive.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the great review Maureen. I appreciate your encouragement. Debi
Comment from Doc Holiday
I caught you biblical references before reading the author notes, but thank you for the explanation of the Italian sonnet. I really haven't read one of these before. Beautifully written!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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I caught you biblical references before reading the author notes, but thank you for the explanation of the Italian sonnet. I really haven't read one of these before. Beautifully written!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the generous stars and kind comments about the writing. I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from c_lucas
This is a very well written poem with a smooth flow of words, making for a very inspiring read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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This is a very well written poem with a smooth flow of words, making for a very inspiring read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the encouraging review. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi
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You're welcome, Debi. Charlie
Comment from rjuselius
this is an exquisite piece of poetic art dear w.j.! it showcases your talent in spiritual poetry! i love the execution, it flows like water off a duck's back. in god we trust.
thank you for sharing! virtual six..
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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this is an exquisite piece of poetic art dear w.j.! it showcases your talent in spiritual poetry! i love the execution, it flows like water off a duck's back. in god we trust.
thank you for sharing! virtual six..
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the virtual six and the encouraging comments, Rebekka. I appreciate you stopping by to read and review, and especially appreciate you mentioning the excution of the verse. You really brightened by day with your kind remarks.
Debi
Comment from LIJ Red
No negative comments. The title is similar to that of an 1860s hymn, but not identical. Mamma mia, the sonnet she'sa buono. The Italian construction is a lot like a prompt in itself...
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2015
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No negative comments. The title is similar to that of an 1860s hymn, but not identical. Mamma mia, the sonnet she'sa buono. The Italian construction is a lot like a prompt in itself...
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the insightful and fun review. I love the Italian comments. Thank you!
Comment from honeytree
Beautiful art work in every way.
I loved the words written as well
God has chosen us all to live on
earth and hopefully onwards to heaven
He helps us all to walk with confidence
and helps us when we stray.
honeytree
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Beautiful art work in every way.
I loved the words written as well
God has chosen us all to live on
earth and hopefully onwards to heaven
He helps us all to walk with confidence
and helps us when we stray.
honeytree
Comment Written 11-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Hi Honeytree,
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and give such a wonderful review. I appreciate your comments about the message and about the "art work". Thank you so much. Debi
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a very lovely sonnet this is, with marvelous rhyme and an almost musical cadence. I especially love that it is written in such a way as to be so very uplifting, and I liked that you included Biblical quotes in your author's notes. The artwork you chose is marvelous too - gorgeous presentation.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2015
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What a very lovely sonnet this is, with marvelous rhyme and an almost musical cadence. I especially love that it is written in such a way as to be so very uplifting, and I liked that you included Biblical quotes in your author's notes. The artwork you chose is marvelous too - gorgeous presentation.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2015
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Thank you for such uplifting comments. I am pleased you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for the encouraging review.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from skye
Sonnets are so beautiful, smooth lines and rhymes. This one, describing the Savior, Peter, and faith, is very good, with powerful imagery and message.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2015
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Sonnets are so beautiful, smooth lines and rhymes. This one, describing the Savior, Peter, and faith, is very good, with powerful imagery and message.
Excellent.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the gracious comments and generous stars. I am so happy to hear enjoyed this sonnet. I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from MelB
I hope you know, you're precious in my sight.
I'll go ahead and still I'll pay the price,
and open wide my arms and take you in. - my favorite lines
Don't you love that He doesn't push us, but so wants to take us in? This is beautifully written and I really enjoyed it. The artwork is perfect for Peter's scare on the water.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2015
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I hope you know, you're precious in my sight.
I'll go ahead and still I'll pay the price,
and open wide my arms and take you in. - my favorite lines
Don't you love that He doesn't push us, but so wants to take us in? This is beautifully written and I really enjoyed it. The artwork is perfect for Peter's scare on the water.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2015
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Thank you for pointing out your favorite lines. And yes, I agree it is wonderful that he doesn't push. I am so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you for the encouragement.
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You're most welcome:)