Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

Phew! I do hope you feel better now Dean. That was one helluva rant.
You had me scared and I'm not even anonymous.
Perfectly written and presented and your topic and point were quite clear.
Out of sixes, Sorry!
:-) Shirley

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015

No worries, Shirley. I'm just happy and appreciate that you took the time to read and review the poem for me. Your feedback is always constructive, supportive and very helpful.

I ran out of sixes early Tuesday. There are so many talented authors and poets on this site, yourself included!

Thanks again. :)

~Dean

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Directed at those cowards who pick on others and won't identify themselves. I think of those who mute me and give no explanation. High level of violence for sure! I'd hate to meet this "soul" in a dark alley, but then, he wouldn't hide in shadow like his enemy.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

Nope, he's an "In-Your-Face" kinda guy, Shari, LOL.

Thanks very much for your review and comments. They are appreciated, as always. ;)

~Dean

reply by Spitfire on 06-Feb-2015

I didn't know this sort of stuff was still going on! That's what happens when you're popular.

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

Well, you should certainly know then, LOL. ;)

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Dean, is this to be taken literal in the sense that there is an Anonymous on this site, or are you just speaking figuratively and fictionally? Strange personification, no doubt. Great meter and rhyme. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

One has to wonder, do they not, GracieAnn? Could I possibly be capable of such a heinous act? Let me find the cretin, then I'll let you know, LOL...

Comment from daeneam

Exceptional

Am I that anonymous? hahaha That's how I feel towards my annoying foes. I lived in between them and day after day, they are doing things that neighbors living in a row house should not do. My kids requested me to file a written complaint about them, but I just told them what they are doing is a proof that we are blessed as they become meaner. c", Mae

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

Nah, you've got nothing to worry about, my dear c",Mae. You've always been very kind and supportive of what I try to do here. However, this other...person (and I use that term very loosely) should be worried, as well as a few other cruel cretins here whose names shall remain anonymous...for now. Perhaps you'll read about their untimely demise in the newspapers, or see the report on your nightly newscast, if you're prone to watch those sorts of things, heh-heh.

I kid, of course, but you can't fault a guy for having goals and dreams, can you?

Thanks for the supportive comments and outstanding rating. It is greatly appreciated, my friend. :)

~Dean

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Huh, I sure wouldn't want to piss you off or that monster of who you are speaking. Although, I'm sure I run into those types on the streets every day, not even knowing who, where, or when. Thanks for another fine poem. :-)

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

I believe we all do, Ric. But that just makes life and living it a bit more exciting, doesn't it, heh-heh?

As always, I appreciate your comments. ~Dean :}

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

Holly Cow, Dean. Remind me to never give you an bad rating ir to get on your bad side in any way. My neck us twitching just from the thought. A very well executed aabb rhymed poem that executes to perpetrator as well.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thanks, Tom. You have absolutely nothing to worry about, my friend. However, I'd sure like to get my hands on this other arrogant cretin to whom I dedicated this little verse. I'm not adverse to getting below average ratings if there are constructive suggestions to improve it and a shot at raising the rating if I do. I feel that's only fair, and it's what I do for others. But this...person (and I use that term loosely) was simply being cruel. I've got very little use for people like that. They're simply a waste of good oxygen...

Thanks again, Mr. 'T'. I appreciate your comments. ~Dean

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Exceptional

You have to have my last 6, (got to keep you happy!) hehe. I wonder who is so deserving of this rant, Dean, I hate people who criticise others, anonymously or not, but not to give their name just shows them up as a coward. They didn't stop to think that you, the dark man of the night, knows where everyone hides! I think you are such a lovely man, my dear friend!! LOL. Brilliant poem, up to, and beyond your usual high standard. xsx sandra

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

Nah, you've got nothing to worry about, my dear Sandra. You've always been very kind and supportive of what I try to do here. However, this other...person (and I use that term very loosely) should be worried, as well as a few other cruel cretins here whose names shall remain anonymous...for now. Perhaps you'll read about their untimely demise in the newspapers, or see the report on your nightly newscast, if you're prone to watch those sorts of things, heh-heh.

I kid, of course, but you can't fault a guy for having goals and dreams, can you?

Thanks for the supportive comments and outstanding rating. It is greatly appreciated, my friend. :)

~Dean

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 06-Feb-2015

The births, marriages and deaths are the first pages I turn to in our local paper, LOL, I'm always looking to see if I know any who have died. Bit morbid of me really. :) I shall have to keep a look out for more condolence notices on here, LOL, I like nasty people to have gory deaths! :) xxx

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

Me too, LOL! ;)

Comment from Muffins

Excellent

Theses words are dipped in gory, gooey revenge that's thick and powerful. A haunting rhythm flows throughout the poem with a freighting tempo.

Keep on ranting, but I'll be sure to read the with caution.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

Thank you very much, Muffins! I do apologize for the lengthy delay in responding. As always, I really appreciate your comments and review. :)

~Dean

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Oh my God, Dean, you've really peaked my interest. Did someone do you wrong on Fan Story?

I love this poem of revenge written with vile that only you could come up with.

The stanza about Donner cracked me up. 'Just wait until we dance' That would have me shaking in my shoes. I'll bet it felt good to write this. I know you can't (and shouldn't) mention any names, but was it someone here?

What a read! Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Yes, it was, Lou. And yes, it felt very good to get this off of my chest, heh-heh... I just hope the offending party reads it.

Thanks very much for your comments. I appreciate them as always. ~Dean

Comment from Lulube

Excellent

OMG, I think I just met him last night. lol
Great imagery, and love the picture. Peek a boo. lol\

great rhyming in the lines and at the end of lines.
I know there is a rightful term for that but I'm ignorant of these precise terms. lol
Glad you feel better for this rant.

lulube

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

Thank you very much, Lulube. So sorry about the lengthy delay in responding. As always, I really appreciate your comments and review. :)

~Dean

reply by Lulube on 07-Feb-2015

No delay, cause I'm on the same relay. lol

not to worry

lulube