Little Poems
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Comment from Capricorn30
This tree frog isn't green like his amphibian cousins;
No doubt it sees the world differently through glass than through murky waters;
Thank you for sharing your grandson's encounter with this frog in its unusual environment.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015
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This tree frog isn't green like his amphibian cousins;
No doubt it sees the world differently through glass than through murky waters;
Thank you for sharing your grandson's encounter with this frog in its unusual environment.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2015
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Thank you Margaret
Comment from rod007
A frog should not be in a jar. It should be with the stars, insects, trees and caviar. It will find its freedom too one day and we can throw that blasted jar away. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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A frog should not be in a jar. It should be with the stars, insects, trees and caviar. It will find its freedom too one day and we can throw that blasted jar away. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Thank you rod. My sentiments exactly.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Poor little frog. I hope he was "released to pond and trees." A glassy prison can't be much fun. Cute poem. Is your Grandson exhibiting any talent writing poetry? Nicely done, Tom.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Poor little frog. I hope he was "released to pond and trees." A glassy prison can't be much fun. Cute poem. Is your Grandson exhibiting any talent writing poetry? Nicely done, Tom.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Thank you, not get, but he likes to read it and surprised me when he knew about alliteration, quatrains, and what a haiku was.
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Well, he's on the right track! With you guiding him, he could be a talent in the making.
Comment from emrpoems
Good abbaaba rhyming in the first stanza and abbaa
I can understand his unease.Frogs are not used to being in a jar
to eat insects and caviar.Love this line
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Good abbaaba rhyming in the first stanza and abbaa
I can understand his unease.Frogs are not used to being in a jar
to eat insects and caviar.Love this line
Comment Written 12-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Thank you Erica.i like that caviar line myself.
Comment from risktaker
I hope the frog was let out eventually. I like the photo, tone, structure, and message.
A jar is a foreign environment for a frog and his face indicates wonder as to where he is. Great job.
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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I hope the frog was let out eventually. I like the photo, tone, structure, and message.
A jar is a foreign environment for a frog and his face indicates wonder as to where he is. Great job.
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Comment Written 12-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Thank you risktaker. It sure is. I hope so too.
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Comment from Pyrrho
A pleasant mind/thought journey with clear interpretations and some depth to it. The mention of caviar as a frog-food-staple is a great touch.
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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A pleasant mind/thought journey with clear interpretations and some depth to it. The mention of caviar as a frog-food-staple is a great touch.
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015
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Thank you Phrrho.
