Comment from
patcelaw
I have never been much of a sonnet fan, but this is beautifully written. The thought of growing old together and having our eyes dimmed to the changes, yet our hearts swelling more with love is indeed a marvel to me. Blessings. Patricia
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
Comment from
giraffmang
Really enjoyed this entry.
Very evocative with a sincere and heart-felt message.
The 'sound' is spot on.
Good luck
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2014