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Chasing Black Hawk

A farm boy receives a warning about an Indian attack.

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Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this first page of the book. it hooks the reader's interest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
    I am very pleased this scene hooked your interest. Thanks for your kind praise and best wishes.
Comment from Jackreese
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Seems to be the makings of a good novel. Will they attack the settlements or is it just talk. So many routes to go with this. I would be interested in seeing more if that is the case. You are off to a good start.

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
    Black Hawk never did attack this settlement. The story will tell Asa's adventures chasing after him with the Illinois militia and Abraham Lincoln. Thank you for your kind comments.