THE TRINING Book Three
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "THE POMNOT: REVISITED ( Pt 2)"JOURNEY INTO REDEMPTION
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Comment from lindalcreel
I'm pretty sure they were made by Rheuther, but how is still the lingering question. We know he will do everything in his power to defeat Doctrix, but I'm hoping his plans don't pan out. We'll see what else he has in store for these soldiers.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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I'm pretty sure they were made by Rheuther, but how is still the lingering question. We know he will do everything in his power to defeat Doctrix, but I'm hoping his plans don't pan out. We'll see what else he has in store for these soldiers.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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I don't think you were here for book I, but the Pomnots were discussed then. Before the TRINING, which hasn't happened yet (and Doctrex and Axtilla are trying to prevent from happening) There was the Bining, when two dimensions aligned. During that 24 hour period of darkness, the Pomnots who weren't evolving on their original plain, were "sucked up" to the other dimension where they were used by Rhuether to do his bidding. They are also called "the expendables".
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Great name because they are warriors who are expendable.
Comment from Walter L. Jones
importance, mind control, how many, doubt in fight, purpose, story moves, comparison, lines being drawn, where are the fighters, smiles, waiting..Walt
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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importance, mind control, how many, doubt in fight, purpose, story moves, comparison, lines being drawn, where are the fighters, smiles, waiting..Walt
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Thank you, Walt. Love having you here. If only you weren't so long-winded in your reviews...LOL!!! Wouldn't trade them for anything.
Comment from Neonewman
Well now I am intrigued and need to read from the beginning LOL. I thoroughly enjoyed the read and love the picture accompanying the story. God Bless!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Well now I am intrigued and need to read from the beginning LOL. I thoroughly enjoyed the read and love the picture accompanying the story. God Bless!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Thank you my new friend. I appreciate your comment and hope you DO choose to read it from the beginning. NO LOL! God Bless you, as well.
Comment from Goodauthor
I like the picture you used. It sounds like this POMNOT creature was used as a executioner of sorts, and he didn't have strong enough thought processes to realize what he was doing or what the result would be. Sounds a little like what the Romans did when they used the Lions against Christians and Gladiators in the area. I can't believe the civilized Romans could enjoy this kind of bloody display, any more than I could imagine the French coming out in force to what the decapitation of a man. Good luck.
Linda
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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I like the picture you used. It sounds like this POMNOT creature was used as a executioner of sorts, and he didn't have strong enough thought processes to realize what he was doing or what the result would be. Sounds a little like what the Romans did when they used the Lions against Christians and Gladiators in the area. I can't believe the civilized Romans could enjoy this kind of bloody display, any more than I could imagine the French coming out in force to what the decapitation of a man. Good luck.
Linda
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Linda, thank you for your generosity. It's good to see how my chapters get people thinking. You are appreciated!
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You're welcome.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I think the tavern story was the first of this I read.
That is one huge smelly body. Glad I'm only reading about it. Have a good day of writing, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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I think the tavern story was the first of this I read.
That is one huge smelly body. Glad I'm only reading about it. Have a good day of writing, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Yeah, like the medic said, he wasn't one you'd want to hug you. No matter how romantic a hunk he was.
Comment from krprice
No need for a comma after blanket in the first sentence.
Be wary of using semi-colns.
Based on what I already learned. . . Axtilla, . . .
He folded his arms. . . No need to capitalize the 'G' in general.
Make sure you check for commas in sentences with a series of words, phrases, or clauses.
Good, informative chapter.
Karlene
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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No need for a comma after blanket in the first sentence.
Be wary of using semi-colns.
Based on what I already learned. . . Axtilla, . . .
He folded his arms. . . No need to capitalize the 'G' in general.
Make sure you check for commas in sentences with a series of words, phrases, or clauses.
Good, informative chapter.
Karlene
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Thanks, Karlene, for your good eye. I'll check all those out during the edit.
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. This actual made me feel compassion for these 'beasts'. They are being used, and not well, by someone who takes their bodis for cannon fodder...and yet, somewhere in there, there must be some sense of self or feeling...
maybe i am just 'sensitve ' today...it happens..
padumachitta
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Hi. This actual made me feel compassion for these 'beasts'. They are being used, and not well, by someone who takes their bodis for cannon fodder...and yet, somewhere in there, there must be some sense of self or feeling...
maybe i am just 'sensitve ' today...it happens..
padumachitta
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Ya don't wanna feel so sensitive you let one hug you, though! A stinky, stinky death. Thanks for reading, my dear friend.
Comment from Sankey
Good but gross chapter mate. Very realistic. Got me almosty gagging at the thought of the smell ! Good work again. Very well edited and no errors. have n't got back to the ones you pointed out to me before in my auto sorry.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Good but gross chapter mate. Very realistic. Got me almosty gagging at the thought of the smell ! Good work again. Very well edited and no errors. have n't got back to the ones you pointed out to me before in my auto sorry.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Glad you enjoyed the chapter, though gross. Just don't read on a full stomach. You'll be okay.
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Good idea! Was imagining all sorts of extra curricula attachments and resultant smells Arrgghh!
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hey, Jay...
Well the fella in the pix just gives me warm and fuzzy feeling. NOT! If the Pomnot looks anything like him, then only a momma could love him.
Leaning about the enemy is always a good day's work.
Well done.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Hey, Jay...
Well the fella in the pix just gives me warm and fuzzy feeling. NOT! If the Pomnot looks anything like him, then only a momma could love him.
Leaning about the enemy is always a good day's work.
Well done.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Thanks, Jax. Appreciate your commentary. No chapter from you today?
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I posted it earlier but no reads. Now that you ask, I wonder what's going on. It shows I posted on page one.
Grrrr, I'll to check it out. Thx for the thumbs up.
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Did you get an email for Chapter 24??
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Nope. Didn't get it. Pulled it up from the last one I reviewed and sure enough it still is paying 50 % chance of member pump, which means two people haven't reviewed it yet.
I'll read it before bed.
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That happened to you recently didn't it?? I had trouble posting the darn thing too.
NOT putting me in a good mood. Thx.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Oh, those pomnots are such awful creatures. You gave a fantastic description which made it all sound very real, Jay. But at least now they know what they are up against for some part of the battle. Giddy
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Oh, those pomnots are such awful creatures. You gave a fantastic description which made it all sound very real, Jay. But at least now they know what they are up against for some part of the battle. Giddy
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Thanks Giddy for stopping by and reading. Refreshingly short, eh?
