Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Yep, Crazy is as Crazy does! The dude has major dental issues. And not to put too fine a point on it, but his nails are a bit unruly. Might as well go for a mani-pedi! Cover the bases. LOL!!

Great poem and presentation. The best of luck in the contest

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Sep-2014

Thanks, Buckeye (although you have since been transplanted to warmer climes, LOL)

By the looks of things, I am going to need all of the luck that i can get for this contest.

I appreciate your kind and encouraging review,:}

Comment from Dom G Robles

Excellent

A contest entry. This poem amuses me. The experiences here and the images are quite quite weird to me. I can imagine pretty well what the writer is saying and it is strange,if not funny. The picture, too, is odd and a little a little scary. Overall, the poem is nice and pretty. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Thanks, Dom. Just some crazy silliness, and not meant to be anything more serious than that. :}

reply by Dom G Robles on 26-Sep-2014

Ok, I understand. Dom

Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

This is craziness
Written at its best
Just one line in question
But it might just be my exception

He entered into my dark room, --- To me it doesn't flow like the rest, but it could just be the way I'm reading it..

Well done with your entry, Buck

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Thanks, Buck, and I made a few changes to the line you had some trouble with. I sincerely appreciate your comments. :}

reply by Trybuck on 26-Sep-2014

after he'd come into my room -- after he came into my room --
I don't know if you're trying to keep the syllable count up or not -- The way you have it now reads better than it did... To me anyways, but I'm no expert by any means -- Hope it does well in the contest, Buck

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is spooky and creepy but well written. It describes the process that mental patients go through well and shows the warped reasoning of the patient. Good job!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Thanks very much, RYME4U. I'm very glad that you enjoyed it. :}

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Eeewww, and YIKES! I am afraid this is just too much like watching a movie, really, and it's not the kind I find I'm able to watch much anymore...I LOVED it (since I'm safely behind my computer's screen...(LOL). All kidding aside, well done, author - the imagery evoked is crystal-clear and frightening as ever! Best of luck with this little gruesome jewel.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Thanks, Dawn, I appreciate that, and I'm really happy that you liked it. :}

reply by Dawn Munro on 26-Sep-2014

I LOVED it- creepy as it is! (LOL) Perfect entertainment for a horror buff!!!

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

;>)

Thanks!

reply by Dawn Munro on 26-Sep-2014

:) my pleasure!

Comment from pattipac

Excellent

Wow, you have certainly described a horrific tale of what an insane person might do. Excellent word choice, rhyme-scheme, and humor make your poem come alive.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Thanks a bunch, pattipac. I really appreciate your encouragement and kind comments. :}

Comment from victor 66

Exceptional

Well, I can guess who wrote this, because it is so very good. Not a surprise but definitely a delight. I see a win on the horizon for your entry and justifiably so. Wow!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Well, I don't know about winning, Vic, I ain't doing too good right now. But, it's still early, and there's always hope, huh?

Thanks so very much for your wonderful six star rating and stellar review. :}

reply by victor 66 on 26-Sep-2014

Well, I read them all, yours should still win. "It ain't over till it's over". Besides, I found your piece very touching and very close to my heart. After reading, I'm pretty sure I felt a single tear fall from my cheek.

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

You're absolutely right. It ain't over until it's over, Vic.

Thanks again, buddy! :D

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Yikes yikes yikes....well this is gross
Insanity is isn't it...it seems insanity and pretty are antonyms..no matter how you cut it...or stab it or slice it...and this was European....say it out loud you'll get it then
God bless

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Thanks, kiwijenny. I really appreciate your thoughts and review.

Bless you and yours as well. :}

Comment from Leigh Ann

Exceptional

You did well with this writing prompt. Oh my goodness, I saw all of that in my head from the peeing to the break out of the mental institution. It caught me off guard but I liked it. Hmm...what does that say about me.
Good work here. LOL

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

Well, Leigh Ann, I think it simply demonstrates that you have a wonderfully dark sense of humor, and are most likely a very fun person to be around. There's nothing wrong with that, LOL!

Thanks so much for your exceptional rating and fun response. I truly appreciate it. :}

Comment from onebrit

Excellent

Well I found this somewhat disturbing, so I suppose it achieved it's goal. I have always been scared of people with MH issues as its out of my comfort zone. I don't like scary movies either! Well written

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014

I thank you for reviewing it objectively, onebrit, even though it isn't exactly your cup of tea. I truly appreciate your kind and thoughtful review. :}