Comment from gypsycaravan

Excellent

Man, that would be worse than getting' the stuffin' knocked outta ya. Cute little piece of flash fiction. Loved the hashtags and photo. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

This is another great entry for this quite difficult competition, I hate bullying and bullies, but had to raise a smile at this, good luck.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Another blatant attack on the obese. Shame on you. Neat way to dodge condemnation for SPAGs-atrocious dialect. I am
kidding of course. Extreme flash, indeed.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

How to give a bully his/her comeupance! Contrary to the warning, I don't think this has ANY sexual content. It scores high on the EWWWWW content, however.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

Comment from mikemagine

Excellent

Very funny!! SHEESH! Imagine THAT! Ewww! We often do reap what we sew. This is very well told, funny, and offers a morale. I see no flaws here.

Peace,

Mike

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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014