Little Poems
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Comment from lindalcreel
The picture was brilliant. I've seen many a sky like that in Florida, where we have an everyday afternoon shower. Most of the time they don't last long, but if you get caught, you will get soaked. Thanks again for the information about the Rictometer, I had no idea what that was.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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The picture was brilliant. I've seen many a sky like that in Florida, where we have an everyday afternoon shower. Most of the time they don't last long, but if you get caught, you will get soaked. Thanks again for the information about the Rictometer, I had no idea what that was.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you lindacreel. Glad to help.
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Comment from Jean Lutz
Well done. Although here it is reversed. The weatherman said it would rain and so far the sky is blue and the sun is smiling. Maybe our weather forecasters should start writing poetry.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Well done. Although here it is reversed. The weatherman said it would rain and so far the sky is blue and the sun is smiling. Maybe our weather forecasters should start writing poetry.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you Hean. great idea.
Comment from Trybuck
I for one appreciate the use of rhyming in the rictameter and for the life of me don't understand why the contest didn't allow it..
Well done with this one, Buck
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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I for one appreciate the use of rhyming in the rictameter and for the life of me don't understand why the contest didn't allow it..
Well done with this one, Buck
Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you Buck. Me neither. My they can't rhyme.
Comment from tfawcus
It certainly looks as if those stadium lights will be needed if the game is to go ahead! The weather forecaster's lot is not a happy one. Even with the mass of recorded data at his disposal, his predictions are still an inexact science!
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It certainly looks as if those stadium lights will be needed if the game is to go ahead! The weather forecaster's lot is not a happy one. Even with the mass of recorded data at his disposal, his predictions are still an inexact science!
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you tfawcus. That is an understatement.
Comment from rrabinow
Great job with this poetry prompt. You did well with the requirement. I like the description that you use in your poem. Great picture as well. Best of luck.
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Great job with this poetry prompt. You did well with the requirement. I like the description that you use in your poem. Great picture as well. Best of luck.
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
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Thank you rraninow .
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You are welcome.
