Commentary and Philosophy
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Comment from Capricorn30
In reading your author notes, it's also rather astounding how planes go against the law of gravity--all else adheres to earth--planes soar away from gravitational pull;
A well-penned poem, incorporating good visuals;
"silver clouded sky";
"watching stars;
as they twinkled in";
"the night"--so much to enjoy in both day and evening skies.
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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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In reading your author notes, it's also rather astounding how planes go against the law of gravity--all else adheres to earth--planes soar away from gravitational pull;
A well-penned poem, incorporating good visuals;
"silver clouded sky";
"watching stars;
as they twinkled in";
"the night"--so much to enjoy in both day and evening skies.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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Thank you Margaret. Glad you liked it.