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Comment from Joan E.
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I admired your compelling title, photograph and shape of your free verse. I admired the "inner strength" (Evil Eddie got involved!) focus with the final line. Cheers- Joan

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 Comment Written 06-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014
    Thank you Joan. Fixed it.
reply by Joan E. on 06-Jul-2014
    I am the world's worst typist--I'm sure you'll help me catch one of these in the future! Your poem resonated for me, since I am fighting the good fight with idiopathic (cause unknown) peripheral neuropathy. Hope you're enjoying a peaceful, holiday Sunday- Joan