Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

i love, love the last stanza! it really is uplifting. i especially like the two last lines. finding the real you is genius! i wish i had 6 stars to give..
good luck in the contest!

rebekka x

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014

---

reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014

Thanks you for the wonderful review and the virtual 6 stars, I appreciate it.