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Recognition

Short study

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Comment from cory4
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Dear Cogitator,

Your piece of writing was very interesting to say the least. All the theory you have described rings true in many cases. You seem to suggest everyone must be more truthful and seek out the truth. I agree with you. I also liked the section in your piece of writing where you explained main groups in society don't accept new ideas into their group. I agree with you entirely on this. Main groups in society tend to have norms that are accepted as part of the group, however this leaves them ignorant and inflexible to change. It also leaves them open to make mistakes because of their narrow minded behavior. Your piece of writing suggests we should seek out the truth, which i find mainstream society tends to bend for its own uses and satisfaction. I am a loner and an individual. Your piece of writing has sure struck the right chords for me. Your piece of writing is well written, the vocabulary is excellent. You know exactly what your talking about. Overall a brilliant piece of writing. Well done!

Kind Regards,
Cory4

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
    You're very kind. Thank you for your review and the stellar rating...John
Comment from Norbanus
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What a powerful idea you've expressed here:
'groups that have something in common very seldom allow new thoughts'
As someone once said 'It's really hard, for a person to gather new information, if they already know everything at the start.'

Nicely shown.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much for the kind words...John
Comment from padumachitta
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Hello. An inteses and well written piece. I like you rpemise with the Grand Opeerating Desgin. Simply enough to understand...danged hard to put in practice. Keep posting these little gems of wisdom...sometimes one has to kep reading and reading and thinking to see the trtuh.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
    Thanks for the kind words...John
Comment from juliaSjames
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"Truth will eventually enter. Let it happen."

I love these words. Time after time, long after I've puzzled over something, the meaning will come to me; perhaps when I'm brushing my teeth!

In my opinion, this is one of your clearest and most impacting writes, John.

Thought provoking of course. That's a given. But written with sincerity and confidence.

I hope it makes a difference and encourages readers to probe more deeply into their inner space. To this end, you might wish to add a reading list and/or pertinent websites to your author notes.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
    I am thinking of making this the introduction to a collection of essays in a future book. I have learned much from you and others about clarifying my message. Thanks for the participation and valuable comments...John
Comment from rama devi
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Bravo for this outstanding, lucid essay on important and relevant spiritual perspectives and insights. I resonate with the way you think, my friend!

This essay is well organized, smoothly paved and with smooth transitions from one paragraph to the next.


Superbly articulate voicing, with many memorable and meaningful lines. My favorites:


Cognition means to KNOW and recognition means to know again.

Every commonality we recognize in others must be contained within ourselves or else we couldn't re-cognize it.

We have to use reflection to find our cognition.

We create our universe as our conscious knowledge allows. If we prevent new understanding to enter our mind, no progress will be made.

If we recognize evil, we are echoing evil.

To me, this metaphysical universe is the software I call the Grand Operating Design. The physical world (hardware) and the spiritual world (software) must coexist for us to recognize our universe.

Grand
Operating
Design

What a great name for G.O.D.!

Brilliantly articulated:

Our brain's left hemisphere is digital and identifies particles as forms. The right hemisphere interprets waves as emotion and is where Agape and compassion reside. If we do not use both sides to contemplate truth, we will fall short of understanding.

Nicely voiced:

If we recognize this to be true, it is the Nirvana of Buddhism, The Heaven of Christianity, the Paradise of Islam and the Peace of Mind all people want.

Thanks for sharing this. I hope many read it and ponder...

Love,
rd

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
    Thanks again. From the feedback I get, it is not yet simple enough for many, but it definitely has impact. Agape will live...John
reply by rama devi on 13-Apr-2014
    Indeed it will. Your writing is not digestible for lower to average intellect, but for bright people, it is brilliant and articulate...easy to understand. Agape will live! Love, rd
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Big message, and one that is very much true. All the pieces are there and always have been. Now, it's just a matter of both brains and all the parts to work together. Thanks for the pleasure of another great read. :-)

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
    Thank you for the kind comments...John
Comment from emrpoems
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A very thought provoking poem that makes you want to sit and do some introspection.Your notes are brief but say it all. you have considered several issues of humanity that confront us every day.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
    Thank you...John
Comment from wordsmatter2me
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I learned a lot from your short study. One message I will remember is what you write about the word Evil spelled backwards is live. I have read the books of Dr. Dyer and seen the movie Star wars yet your message is so powerful and so simple told in looking for our inward heaven.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
    Thank you very much for your generous review. Many of my essays attempt to broaden the mind's dimensions...John
Comment from Will Thomas
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Absolutely perfectly said. Grand Operating Design, very nice. Be the change you wish to see. Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much for your review. You will find my portfolio has many essays. This one will probably wind up as the intro to a book of essays...John
Comment from Njorgensen
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I recognize the truth and strength of this message. The power it uses to explain something so abstract and concrete
serves to inspire introspection, hopefully for all who read it. Whether the reader agrees with your words or not, it cannot be denied that it is insightful and well-written.

Njorgensen

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
    Thank you for your kind words...John