Little Poems
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Comment from C. Dow
Nice poem about theses messy,birds! We have them at every lake we go to. They are still fun to watch , especially when the dogs try to chase them back into the water. I guess Geese just love MN.
C. Dow
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Nice poem about theses messy,birds! We have them at every lake we go to. They are still fun to watch , especially when the dogs try to chase them back into the water. I guess Geese just love MN.
C. Dow
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thanks C Dow. This is fun. Some golf courses hire dogs to keep them away.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A very descriptive and self eexplanatory series of rhyming couplets .
The chosen picture captures the moments you describe well.
I understand your sentiments well.
We have whistling ducks which breed well, have a high pitched whistle and eat the grain and fresh planted seeds and grasses constantly.
Over here many birds are classified as protected species so eradication or reduction requires a special permit which beings it's own set of problems.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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A very descriptive and self eexplanatory series of rhyming couplets .
The chosen picture captures the moments you describe well.
I understand your sentiments well.
We have whistling ducks which breed well, have a high pitched whistle and eat the grain and fresh planted seeds and grasses constantly.
Over here many birds are classified as protected species so eradication or reduction requires a special permit which beings it's own set of problems.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you Shirley. Yup, red tape is even worse.
Comment from joneau2
Hey, I'm back. And I see you're still going strong. Yeah, I believe your wife is correct. It's not getting worth upset to the extent your blood pressure rises when your contest entries go unnoticed, or not appreciated. All of us realize that that some lousy works sometimes win the contests. It's a good thing the "FanStory Committee" isn't involved.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Hey, I'm back. And I see you're still going strong. Yeah, I believe your wife is correct. It's not getting worth upset to the extent your blood pressure rises when your contest entries go unnoticed, or not appreciated. All of us realize that that some lousy works sometimes win the contests. It's a good thing the "FanStory Committee" isn't involved.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you Joneau. I am following her advice. Glad to see you are back.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, treishel, you are right, they are noisy and the winter brought them here to squalk day and night. I enjoyed reading it and love the picture.
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this is very well written, treishel, you are right, they are noisy and the winter brought them here to squalk day and night. I enjoyed reading it and love the picture.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Sweetwoodjax. Then you definitely know what I mean.
Comment from Cindy Warren
I guess most large birds are noisy and messy, but I love watching them fly. Nice use of rhyming couplets. This was an enjoyable read.
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I guess most large birds are noisy and messy, but I love watching them fly. Nice use of rhyming couplets. This was an enjoyable read.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2014
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Thank you Cindy
