Little Poems
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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I'm really impressed by this amazing Petrachan sonnet.
A lovely presentation and image complements this beautiful poem which at first focuses on the beauty of the rose but then exposes a love so true.
I can offer only a virtual six but it is worthy for sure.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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I'm really impressed by this amazing Petrachan sonnet.
A lovely presentation and image complements this beautiful poem which at first focuses on the beauty of the rose but then exposes a love so true.
I can offer only a virtual six but it is worthy for sure.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Thank you Shirley. I'll take a virtual. It's that part of the week.
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Trescchel,
"Blest Beauty" is exceptional poetry and an excellent sonnet. It meets all of the requirements of the petarchan sonnet. It is almost a poetic tour de force.
Preston
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Hi, Trescchel,
"Blest Beauty" is exceptional poetry and an excellent sonnet. It meets all of the requirements of the petarchan sonnet. It is almost a poetic tour de force.
Preston
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you Preston, very high praise. I am pleased.
Comment from sunnilicious
Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Well thought out and clearly written with good visual imagery. Good author notes. Enjoyable to read. NIce work.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Well thought out and clearly written with good visual imagery. Good author notes. Enjoyable to read. NIce work.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you Alicia.
Comment from Dirus
Very nice poem. I like the least line the best.'Adoring notes, the best under the sun. Its precious you, Dear, for which my heart sings.' Nice job on the picture to go with this. Keep up the good work and thank you for the good read.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Very nice poem. I like the least line the best.'Adoring notes, the best under the sun. Its precious you, Dear, for which my heart sings.' Nice job on the picture to go with this. Keep up the good work and thank you for the good read.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you Dirus.
Comment from queenv
The beauty of the rose is ageless. I like how you eloquently describe the many hues of the rose. I love how you teach the type of poetry. It is helping me.
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The beauty of the rose is ageless. I like how you eloquently describe the many hues of the rose. I love how you teach the type of poetry. It is helping me.
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you queenv.
Comment from RGstar
You humble me, oh master with your majestic structures. So much fantastic in formation in your notes. I did not know such structures existed. You astound me at the many.
However, my concern is the life, soul, and empathy for the subject in which you write....and may I say, you have captured that here .
A marvelous writing in ode to the rose, one of my favorite flower.
You managed to incorporate a little swashbuckling, Elizabethan touch to it in which I found charming.
You made it through with flying colours.
Very good write, Treschiel,
RG
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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You humble me, oh master with your majestic structures. So much fantastic in formation in your notes. I did not know such structures existed. You astound me at the many.
However, my concern is the life, soul, and empathy for the subject in which you write....and may I say, you have captured that here .
A marvelous writing in ode to the rose, one of my favorite flower.
You managed to incorporate a little swashbuckling, Elizabethan touch to it in which I found charming.
You made it through with flying colours.
Very good write, Treschiel,
RG
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you RG in am most pleased that you rely like it.
