senryu (headache)
senryu22 total reviews
Comment from hifein
love this little senyru. it is a clever take on the much cliched aspirin prescription. if you remember comedian henny youngman, he might have said, take these two doctors, please. you have good wit and it comes across well in this fun senyru.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
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love this little senyru. it is a clever take on the much cliched aspirin prescription. if you remember comedian henny youngman, he might have said, take these two doctors, please. you have good wit and it comes across well in this fun senyru.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
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I am so glad you enjoyed this. Thank you~Debbie
Comment from JW
Man. I just ready a senryu that gave me a Headache.
Yet, the advice within is one I would not follow.
I'd prefer to take an aspirin, forget the doctors and save the $$$.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
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Man. I just ready a senryu that gave me a Headache.
Yet, the advice within is one I would not follow.
I'd prefer to take an aspirin, forget the doctors and save the $$$.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2013
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Me too. I have little respect for doctors. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment from B. Diehl
Love it. So little words...yet, it says so much and can be interpreted in so many different ways. I can totally respect that. Great poem and great picture you added along with it. Five stars, five stars!
-B<3
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Love it. So little words...yet, it says so much and can be interpreted in so many different ways. I can totally respect that. Great poem and great picture you added along with it. Five stars, five stars!
-B<3
Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from Econ Teacher
Take two doctors and call me in the morning is a great play on the old take two pills and then call me in the morning. Though most men would probably prefer to take two nurses.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Take two doctors and call me in the morning is a great play on the old take two pills and then call me in the morning. Though most men would probably prefer to take two nurses.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from Liandra
Oh I can relate to that...
You are brilliant, I just enjoy your words so much. The way you use them and they make sense. It proves we don't need long sentences for description. (Hope that makes sense.)
LOL :):) :)
Liandra
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Oh I can relate to that...
You are brilliant, I just enjoy your words so much. The way you use them and they make sense. It proves we don't need long sentences for description. (Hope that makes sense.)
LOL :):) :)
Liandra
Comment Written 10-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from Cajungirl
Hahaha. It certainly takes more than one doctor to diagnose you these days. With changes in our insurance we will likely need an entire medical group. I enjoyed your poem and the picture is perfect.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Hahaha. It certainly takes more than one doctor to diagnose you these days. With changes in our insurance we will likely need an entire medical group. I enjoyed your poem and the picture is perfect.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from barkingdog
I'm afraid that would be an over dose. I can barely take one. LOL
This is a great changing up on the usual phrase that doctors say: 'Take two aspirin and ...'
What were you drinking? LOL
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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I'm afraid that would be an over dose. I can barely take one. LOL
This is a great changing up on the usual phrase that doctors say: 'Take two aspirin and ...'
What were you drinking? LOL
Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from mountainwriter49
Hi, Debbie
This is great senryu. Sarcasm galore in this well written senryu. I've had enough of docs for the past three years to be able to relate to this.
Well done,
Ray
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Hi, Debbie
This is great senryu. Sarcasm galore in this well written senryu. I've had enough of docs for the past three years to be able to relate to this.
Well done,
Ray
Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from SteveY
Yea, but I'll leave off paying for the doctor visit or my headache will just get worse! Great picture that you've got with this one. It too says it all!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Yea, but I'll leave off paying for the doctor visit or my headache will just get worse! Great picture that you've got with this one. It too says it all!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
Comment from Val Crisson
Love this, and love the pun on "doctors," which I've learned to not to let run my life. I'm sure whoever you "call in the morning" will be better than the medical community. Though I must say there are some good ones out there.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Love this, and love the pun on "doctors," which I've learned to not to let run my life. I'm sure whoever you "call in the morning" will be better than the medical community. Though I must say there are some good ones out there.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2013
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Thank you so very much. I am overwhelmed with the number of reviews I let pile up. Please be assured that I have read them all and truly appreciate them. I am sorry I am sending a generic reply, but hope you understand~Debbie
