Little Poems
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Comment from mermaids
Excellent poetic form here.
Looks like a magic carpet is a line that gives the leaf character,the reader feels the lightness of a flying magic carpet, excellent use of descriptive words to convey feelings.
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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Excellent poetic form here.
Looks like a magic carpet is a line that gives the leaf character,the reader feels the lightness of a flying magic carpet, excellent use of descriptive words to convey feelings.
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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Thank you mermaids.
