The Critic
A Satirical Review16 total reviews
Comment from Econ Teacher
For the contest prompt, this is a very good poem. The satire is thick and heavy, exactly as it should be. It's bad, but you might have described me a little too well. I'm an outright jerk.
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For the contest prompt, this is a very good poem. The satire is thick and heavy, exactly as it should be. It's bad, but you might have described me a little too well. I'm an outright jerk.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
Comment from Ben Colder
You made it rhyme. I find no fault with this poem. The wording is good and the rules are kept. What else could a reviewer want. Best wishes in the contest.
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You made it rhyme. I find no fault with this poem. The wording is good and the rules are kept. What else could a reviewer want. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
Comment from newbie1
Great flow, nicely written! The image seems perfect in keeping with the tone of the poem as well. And I'm pretty sure about everybody on this site can relate to your pain! :)
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Great flow, nicely written! The image seems perfect in keeping with the tone of the poem as well. And I'm pretty sure about everybody on this site can relate to your pain! :)
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. I was ready to reach through the computer and strangle the guy. Then I read the end. I had a good laugh. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I was ready to reach through the computer and strangle the guy. Then I read the end. I had a good laugh. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Thank you. A good laugh is what I was going for.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is just too cute, mystery writer, i enjoyed reading this satirical review to the poem that was written, my brain just started to ooze when i tried to comprehend the luc bat poem and now i have to clean the floor again, lol. i enjoyed reading the notes too. good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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this is just too cute, mystery writer, i enjoyed reading this satirical review to the poem that was written, my brain just started to ooze when i tried to comprehend the luc bat poem and now i have to clean the floor again, lol. i enjoyed reading the notes too. good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Thank you. Yes, Luc bat is a challenge to write. I'm glad you enjoyed the humor
Comment from Cajungirl
hahahaha, Your poem is very funny. Your AABB rhyming is great and the poem flows very well. I think you have an excellent Write a Review contest entry. I wish you the best of luck.
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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hahahaha, Your poem is very funny. Your AABB rhyming is great and the poem flows very well. I think you have an excellent Write a Review contest entry. I wish you the best of luck.
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2013
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Thank you. I just wanted us all to relax and have fun again.
