Little Poems
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Comment from Selina Stambi
Clever, clever, clever, Tom!
I remember reading that very beautifully done poem by Indie Skreet.
Nice, steady beat in your aabb quatrains.
This one is so romantic and well done ... to echo our friend Gungalo ... SIGH!
Sonali :)
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Clever, clever, clever, Tom!
I remember reading that very beautifully done poem by Indie Skreet.
Nice, steady beat in your aabb quatrains.
This one is so romantic and well done ... to echo our friend Gungalo ... SIGH!
Sonali :)
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Thank you Sonali. That sound like her for sure.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Scrabble poems are certainly a different approach but
quite effective.
You quite ably designed a tale of romance beginning
with just one name.
Presented and formatted well.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Scrabble poems are certainly a different approach but
quite effective.
You quite ably designed a tale of romance beginning
with just one name.
Presented and formatted well.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Thank you Shirley.
Comment from sunnilicious
I did not know that you could use names on the scrabble board. Maybe, it's in the dictionary. Good story in a poem. Good poetic form, quatrains. Good rhymes. Nice work.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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I did not know that you could use names on the scrabble board. Maybe, it's in the dictionary. Good story in a poem. Good poetic form, quatrains. Good rhymes. Nice work.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2013
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Thanks Akicia. Actually you can't , but then where would the story go?
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You're funny. Goodnight.
Have a great Halloween too!
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent poem with quatrain structure with closing couplet and rhyming couplets, ABAB. It follows the rhyme scheme consistently with good rhyme. It has good flow and figurative language and imagery.
Preston
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent poem with quatrain structure with closing couplet and rhyming couplets, ABAB. It follows the rhyme scheme consistently with good rhyme. It has good flow and figurative language and imagery.
Preston
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much, Preston.
Comment from RGstar
Fine aabb poem
Interaction and emotion present.
You would beat me at scrabble, Treischel. I have never been a leader for board games.
A lovely catchy little write.
I think I may have to get me one of those, as it does improve word usage.
Good one,
Take care.
RGstar
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Fine aabb poem
Interaction and emotion present.
You would beat me at scrabble, Treischel. I have never been a leader for board games.
A lovely catchy little write.
I think I may have to get me one of those, as it does improve word usage.
Good one,
Take care.
RGstar
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Thank you RG.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Hey mr T This was a neat pros to say the least..What a great idea to use a scrabble board as the center of of love poem.. You never cease to amaze me with your think outside the box mind of yours Kudos on a job well don sir
TK
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Hey mr T This was a neat pros to say the least..What a great idea to use a scrabble board as the center of of love poem.. You never cease to amaze me with your think outside the box mind of yours Kudos on a job well don sir
TK
Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Thank you Sir T. I bet you and Ginger Could easily do one of these.
Comment from abbasjoy
This is a neat way of playing scrabble and writing a poem, all at the same time. Quite unique and must have been a lot of fun to do.
The meaning of the words on the board are well thought out and form a nice rhyming scheme as well.
Well done.
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This is a neat way of playing scrabble and writing a poem, all at the same time. Quite unique and must have been a lot of fun to do.
The meaning of the words on the board are well thought out and form a nice rhyming scheme as well.
Well done.
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
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Thank you abbasjoy.
Comment from robina1978
I have never seen this form before but it is very very nice. I used to be addicted to scrabble: first in Dutch, then in English.
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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I have never seen this form before but it is very very nice. I used to be addicted to scrabble: first in Dutch, then in English.
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2013
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Thank you Ine. You should dig it out of the dust bin. It might brighten up your days.
