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ABC Super Hero

superhero fun

49 total reviews 
Comment from rightforyou
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Well done my friend what a great job on this poem...I will have to give a go and try one sometime myself in the near future...Cheers Thanks again
Ron

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Thank you. I appreciate the kind remarks and the generous review. Children's poetry is not my normal write, but I wrote if for my nephew and he liked it. I look forward to seeing what you write.
Comment from Mastery
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LOL...Very well done, W. J.. I see you haven't been around in a while. With poetry like this you should staay with us. I was reading along, wondering how is she going to handle the X and Z? But you pulled it off very well. Good write, Bob (Mastery)

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Thank you, Bob (Mastery). I appreciate the encouraging comments. I did join in November last year, but didn't get back to the site until April and started learning how to navigate around. I've recently decided to try to get something posted about once a week or so. Thanks for reading and especially for you gracious remarks about staying on the site.
reply by Mastery on 29-Aug-2013
    I will make myself a fan so I won't miss your writing from now on. I write prose for the most part, and I tooonly post on Sundays as a rule. Take care...Perhaps you can do the same and we can enjoy each other's writes. Bob
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Sounds like a plan. Thank you.
Comment from Keri353
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Great picture to go with your wonderful poem. Ahhhhhh, so much good from those super hero's. It would be so nice if like was that easy. This poem should definitely go in a children's book. I loved it. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Blessings, Keri

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Thank you, Keri. I appreciate the gracious and encouraging remarks. Thanks you for the generous stars.
reply by Keri353 on 30-Aug-2013
    You are so very welcome :)
Comment from Jackarrie
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This is brilliantly written using the whole alphabet, to tell your story in abc style, a great write and I can see how the kids will love it.

Well done and good luck. Mary

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Thank you, Mary. I appreciate the generous stars and the encouraging remarks.
Comment from Darkhorse555
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Is this the alphabet hero who got zapped to dust in outer space when monsters threaten to destroy you penned a lovely piece

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    I was hoping the dashes indicated that the heroes were the ones that said "you go!" to the villains who get zapped, but I did worry a bit that it might be confusing. Thank you for the generous stars.
Comment from allborn66
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This is a terrific poem. I can see most children really loving this one. I loved the form you chose, the stanzas go nicely with the rhyming scheme. The picture is a great touch.
Barbara

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Thank you, Barbara. I appreciate the kind comments and generous review stars.
Comment from Brocha1
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very appealing.great idea to choose the abc form . The simplicity of the language makes it perfectly suitable for kids while at the same time it's great reading for me.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the kind comments and encouraging review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Wow, this is a fabulous ABC poem, and you surely have outdone the requirements for the contest! Best of luck with this wonderfully rhymed ABC!

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the encouraging comments and well wishes. I appreciate the generous stars.
Comment from denhagan
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I thought this was both a cute and brilliant work of poetry--Having written an abecedarian poem, and using it to tell a story, and making it rhyme. Great picture.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Wow! Thank you! I appreciate the very generous six star rating. Even more, I appreciate your encouraging comments and analysis.
reply by denhagan on 30-Aug-2013
    You're welcome. The review and comments were well-deserved,
    Dennis
Comment from reconciled
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Hi JW, This is really a great write. I know the kids love all these super hero's. Really a great abc poem. And I love the picture. Very well done..

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2013

reply by the author on 29-Aug-2013
    Thank you for the generous review and the kind comments. I appreciate you taking time to read and review my work.