Wined Down
Sometimes the glass isn't big enough.15 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Oh, mercy GWHARGIS! Well, it's often said that writing is the best form of therapy, so maybe writing about it allowed you to fulfill that need in a more creative way, yes? Better yet, no headaches when you woke up, at least not from the wine anyway!
Good stuff, very funny...
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Oh, mercy GWHARGIS! Well, it's often said that writing is the best form of therapy, so maybe writing about it allowed you to fulfill that need in a more creative way, yes? Better yet, no headaches when you woke up, at least not from the wine anyway!
Good stuff, very funny...
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from 9999pool
Wine and intoxication and a drunkard usually goes hand in hand. Have a celebration, get slightly high and wind down. Sleep comes easy though there could be a hangover in the morning after.
Good write and well penned.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Wine and intoxication and a drunkard usually goes hand in hand. Have a celebration, get slightly high and wind down. Sleep comes easy though there could be a hangover in the morning after.
Good write and well penned.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thanks for the nice review. Gretchen
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Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed day.
Ritchie. Hugs. :))
Comment from Titanx9
I like how you "gulped it down." It's safe to say you are not an alcoholic. I have similar experiences if I drink more than one glass of wine, so when I do decide to live on the wild side, I drink champagne. I hope you're feeling better today. When you need to relieve stress, find someplace quiet and sit alone in a comfortable seat. Slow down you breathing so that you're inhaling no more than five gulps of air in a minute. Then try to think of something that gave you pleasure, and stay there until you can create something that will likely give you joy in the future. Over time, this process has worked for me and, at times, has been a life saver.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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I like how you "gulped it down." It's safe to say you are not an alcoholic. I have similar experiences if I drink more than one glass of wine, so when I do decide to live on the wild side, I drink champagne. I hope you're feeling better today. When you need to relieve stress, find someplace quiet and sit alone in a comfortable seat. Slow down you breathing so that you're inhaling no more than five gulps of air in a minute. Then try to think of something that gave you pleasure, and stay there until you can create something that will likely give you joy in the future. Over time, this process has worked for me and, at times, has been a life saver.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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No, can't afford to be an alcoholic. thank you for the great review. Gretchen
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
I truly do not like wine because if you don't pay attention, you're drunk before you realize it. The wine hangovers are the worst to get rid of. When I overdo drinking scotch, before I go to bed, I take 2 alka seltzers and 1000 mil grams of ibuprofen. I wake without a hangover. This was a fun and easy reading piece of poetry,,,,,,Jim
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I truly do not like wine because if you don't pay attention, you're drunk before you realize it. The wine hangovers are the worst to get rid of. When I overdo drinking scotch, before I go to bed, I take 2 alka seltzers and 1000 mil grams of ibuprofen. I wake without a hangover. This was a fun and easy reading piece of poetry,,,,,,Jim
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
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Thank you for the great review. Gretchen
Comment from krys123
I first noticed that the wind was blue and you stated that it's either red or white. Such as poetic justice I guess. The rhythm is very well done which makes it easy for the poem to read. Also it is very well penned. You picked a very interesting topic and the context is true to heart.
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece.
I appreciate your poem very much.
You have a good one in God bless.
AK
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I first noticed that the wind was blue and you stated that it's either red or white. Such as poetic justice I guess. The rhythm is very well done which makes it easy for the poem to read. Also it is very well penned. You picked a very interesting topic and the context is true to heart.
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece.
I appreciate your poem very much.
You have a good one in God bless.
AK
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thanks for the wonderful review. Gretchen
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You're welcome Gretchen
AK
