Skinny Dipping
Don't go skinny dipping with the sea creatures54 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fun post Beth and your sentiment here made me smile, especially the nipping of those sea creatures! Love your rhymes and flow and the humour here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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This is a fun post Beth and your sentiment here made me smile, especially the nipping of those sea creatures! Love your rhymes and flow and the humour here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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I'm glad you got a smile from my repost. Thanks for the review.
Beth
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Well, now you have chosen quite the photo for your Gertrude poem but I'm sure Gertie won't mind. I would think the only place that's safe to skinny dip is a pool among a nudist colony. Thanks for sharing this from 11 years ago. Wow!
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Lol! Well, now you have chosen quite the photo for your Gertrude poem but I'm sure Gertie won't mind. I would think the only place that's safe to skinny dip is a pool among a nudist colony. Thanks for sharing this from 11 years ago. Wow!
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you Helen. I'd never seen but one contest that called for a Gertrude. Most people say they never heard of one hut I person from England was familiar with them.
Beth
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Thank you Helen. I'd never seen but one contest that called for a Gertrude. Most people say they never heard of one hut I person from England was familiar with them.
Beth
Comment from gansach
While I've heard the meter in poems before, I never knew it was called a Gertrude poem--live and learn. This one made me laugh--nice artwork that certainly illustrates your words well (very well-lol!). Cleverly written and very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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While I've heard the meter in poems before, I never knew it was called a Gertrude poem--live and learn. This one made me laugh--nice artwork that certainly illustrates your words well (very well-lol!). Cleverly written and very enjoyable.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you for the review. I'm glad you got a laught from this little poem.
Beth
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I take the blame for whatever went wrong because you seemingly have boarded my demented train
Very unlike the Shelby I have read
It seems it needs a summary verse
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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I take the blame for whatever went wrong because you seemingly have boarded my demented train
Very unlike the Shelby I have read
It seems it needs a summary verse
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you Tom. Since you're taking the blame, you are the perfect person to writie the summary verse. Go ahead. Make my day. LOL
Beth
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I would if I could get my dust bunnies out of the way, but wo. They have cluttered my mind so much wherever one is pushed it forces another into place.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A hilarious poem, Beth!! It is well written and just flows like a song. I found myself saying it like a nursery rhyme, lol. It was really well done. In your notes, you put you wrote it in 2024, but I think you meant 2014. I don't remember it back then, though I was on here a lot at that time, so your safe, but even if I had, I would have enjoyed reading it another time.
Take care, and thanks for the giggle!
Rhonda
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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A hilarious poem, Beth!! It is well written and just flows like a song. I found myself saying it like a nursery rhyme, lol. It was really well done. In your notes, you put you wrote it in 2024, but I think you meant 2014. I don't remember it back then, though I was on here a lot at that time, so your safe, but even if I had, I would have enjoyed reading it another time.
Take care, and thanks for the giggle!
Rhonda
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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I'm glad you got a laugh from this little poem.
Beth
Comment from Iza Deleanu
That was a fun read and so true,friends with benefits....until the benefits run out, and then you are left to your own devices. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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That was a fun read and so true,friends with benefits....until the benefits run out, and then you are left to your own devices. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you Iza. I'm glad your thought this was fun read. I may have shocked some people with that picture.
Beth
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well this is a fun verse, Beth, even though I can't seem to get my head around the format (getting a bit late here in the UK). So I'm going to forget the explanation and enjoy the wonderful flow and humour here. Mind you, I have to try and peel my eyes off the visual which is very distracting. I think you meant an earlier date than 2024 (in the notes). And I still don't understand about re-posting for contests. I thought that was verboten! But well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Well this is a fun verse, Beth, even though I can't seem to get my head around the format (getting a bit late here in the UK). So I'm going to forget the explanation and enjoy the wonderful flow and humour here. Mind you, I have to try and peel my eyes off the visual which is very distracting. I think you meant an earlier date than 2024 (in the notes). And I still don't understand about re-posting for contests. I thought that was verboten! But well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you Debbie, I meant to write 2013. That photo was destracting me as well. Ir was written for a FanStory contest back rhen. Now it is jusr a repost since I didn't hace anything else ready.
Beth
Comment from patcelaw
I think it was a little concerned at the start of this, but as you went along, I enjoyed it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I'm glad you share this with us. It was a fun read. Patricia .
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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I think it was a little concerned at the start of this, but as you went along, I enjoyed it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I'm glad you share this with us. It was a fun read. Patricia .
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you Patricia. I didn't mean to shock you. I glad you went on and read it.
Beth
Comment from jessizero
I had not heard of a Gertrude poem (that I recall), but I really enjoyed this poem on skinny dipping! It was cute and charming, and I liked your rhythm and rhymes. Thank you for reviving this post! Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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I had not heard of a Gertrude poem (that I recall), but I really enjoyed this poem on skinny dipping! It was cute and charming, and I liked your rhythm and rhymes. Thank you for reviving this post! Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 26-May-2024
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Thank you Jess. It was fun to write a Gertrude. Not many people had heard of it but someone from England was familiar with it. I like trhe rhythm too.
Beth
Comment from royowen
Poor boy, when one needs a friend, how much on needs them, then when someone needs to pay the rent, or in this case bail you out, but I think with those muscles, it might be a female lawyer wanting to be on your case, an excellent post Beth, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Poor boy, when one needs a friend, how much on needs them, then when someone needs to pay the rent, or in this case bail you out, but I think with those muscles, it might be a female lawyer wanting to be on your case, an excellent post Beth, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you. Yes, sometime the ones we think or best buddies are just fairweather friends. When they are needed, they disappear.
Beth
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That?s true
