Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

That's a fun poem. It made me crave some bubble gum to play with and it has been years. Creative and very visual. Nice poetic format. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013

Thank you sunnilicious. Why not?

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

That was pretty neat Mr T. Never tried to do a nonet before but must say it might fun to try. I like this bubblicious theme. It just pops right out at cha lol
TK

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013

Thanks Sir T. Yeah! Give one a try. They are fun to write.

Comment from Preston McWhorter

Excellent

Hi, Treischel,
This is an excellent nonet. It meets the line/syllable requirements of the form. It gives good instructions on bubble gum bubble blowing. Mine always popped before they got very big.
Preston

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013

Thanks Preston, I wasn't very good either. My wife is a pro though.

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

LOL! A humorous writing!
A well-penned poem of childhood memories many can relate to;
A retro writing, as I remember the production of these huge, pink bubbles in my teen years.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013

Thanks Margaret. Gets a bit sticky sometimes.

reply by Capricorn30 on 13-Jul-2013

But that's the fun of it!!

Comment from latonyalatrice1

Exceptional

Great poem!! This would be a good short instruction book for children trying to blow a bubble with gum for the first time.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013

Thank you very much latonyalatrice. I would, wouldn't it? I appreciate your wonderful review and all those fabulous stars!!!

Comment from gaangel62

Excellent

Great poem...made me laugh...what's even funnier is your picture with the beard...I can see all that sticky mess in your beard...now that would be a sight....Angie

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 Comment Written 13-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013

Thanks Angie. Yup, that would make a sticky mess for sure.

Comment from CornishChick

Excellent

You are a HOOT (hoot NOT coot). You are rapidly increasing my enjoyment of poetry. I LOVE your stuff!!! I was laughing when I saw the title, even before I clicked on the poem. Are you like that country singer (think it's Toby Keith) who bragged he could write about anything? Somebody handed him a plastic cup and he wrote "Red Solo Cup."
Thanks for brightening my Saturday morning!!
Arlene

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 Comment Written 13-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013

Thank you Arkene. So glad you liked it. You have me smi.ing now.