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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Jaq I hope Indie read your very humorous tribute to her telling her--
so much fun
her humour writes
are full of wit '
although many do know ---
she's (NOT) full of shit
Gert
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Hello Jaq I hope Indie read your very humorous tribute to her telling her--
so much fun
her humour writes
are full of wit '
although many do know ---
she's (NOT) full of shit
Gert
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Thanks Gert. I'm firmly in the 'Indie is NOT full of shit' camp. Your words are appreciated xx
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from Empathy
Like the work...like the sentiment...indiesputable...any friend of IS is a friend of mine...good work. Wish I knew what was going on properly. Cheers! E.
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Like the work...like the sentiment...indiesputable...any friend of IS is a friend of mine...good work. Wish I knew what was going on properly. Cheers! E.
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Thanks Empathy I'm all will become clear. I know Indie will be glad of your support :) Jaq xx
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Thanks Empathy I'm all will become clear. I know Indie will be glad of your support :) Jaq xx
Comment from jmdg1954
A great poem in tribute to your friend. I've had minimal contact with her, but I can understand her frustration and its a down right shame it has to come to this. The wrong person is leaving the site!!
John
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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A great poem in tribute to your friend. I've had minimal contact with her, but I can understand her frustration and its a down right shame it has to come to this. The wrong person is leaving the site!!
John
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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You are so right John but the powers that be have made it impossible for her to stay here with their inaction and their treatment of her. xx
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I get it. Don't agree, but get it...
Comment from NicciFaye
Ditto -----------------------Ditto ----------------------Ditto ----------------------- Ditto -----------------------
Priceless poem.
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Ditto -----------------------Ditto ----------------------Ditto ----------------------- Ditto -----------------------
Priceless poem.
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Lol Nicci.....glad you agree hahaha :) Jaq xx
Comment from Indie Skreet
lol Jaq - all these people breathing a sight of relief that I'm finally pissing off and you taunt them with this lmao. You are the best of friend's a Jewish Nun could ever have - you and Julie of course - my real fleshy friends :) Scotland will soon be chucking me out of their pubs too no doubt - can't wait mate :) And hey Jaq, I didn't even have to pad this review out with shit, so my account won't be suspended again for this one lol, Sending you love as always, your friend Indie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx - that's how I was padding them out :D
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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lol Jaq - all these people breathing a sight of relief that I'm finally pissing off and you taunt them with this lmao. You are the best of friend's a Jewish Nun could ever have - you and Julie of course - my real fleshy friends :) Scotland will soon be chucking me out of their pubs too no doubt - can't wait mate :) And hey Jaq, I didn't even have to pad this review out with shit, so my account won't be suspended again for this one lol, Sending you love as always, your friend Indie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx - that's how I was padding them out :D
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Hahahahahaha Indie-pop I can't wait until we are chucked out together xxx
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lol - maybe if you do one naming Rondeno for the cheat he is, it will do the trick..... actually, please don't. I would hate for him to block you too :) xxxx
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My arse would be out the window as well then. lmao....
He's already un-fanned me ;-) xx
Comment from lakeport
Jewish Nun,indeed that's a lovely heartfelt expressed poem
for your friend Indee Skreet, I enjoyed reading it, God bless uou. Lakeport.
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Jewish Nun,indeed that's a lovely heartfelt expressed poem
for your friend Indee Skreet, I enjoyed reading it, God bless uou. Lakeport.
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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God bless you too Lakeport xxx Thank you x
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your welcome.lakeport.
Comment from Debra White
I completely echo your sentiments Jaq.
Indie's writes are always from the heart and pack a punch wether humorous, making a stand or gut wrenchingly raw. I for one will certainly miss reading her wonderful work.
'unique is she, in
every way
her honest words
will liars
flay
her treatment here
had been
absurd
made to feel
like someone's
turd'
Got to agree, the whole thing is more than farcical....
So glad we're in touch off site.
Wonderful poem Jaq - you made your point well and I'm sure the majority will agree :) Debra x
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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I completely echo your sentiments Jaq.
Indie's writes are always from the heart and pack a punch wether humorous, making a stand or gut wrenchingly raw. I for one will certainly miss reading her wonderful work.
'unique is she, in
every way
her honest words
will liars
flay
her treatment here
had been
absurd
made to feel
like someone's
turd'
Got to agree, the whole thing is more than farcical....
So glad we're in touch off site.
Wonderful poem Jaq - you made your point well and I'm sure the majority will agree :) Debra x
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Thanks so much Debra I speak to her most days. Well a few times a day and she has a huge heart and a deep sense of what's right. She's one in a million :) Jaq xx
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She certainly is one in a million (and has a filthy laugh to die for lol!!) Debra x
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Hahahahaha she does indeed Debra. lmao xxx
Comment from J. Dark
Obviously a sixer, so I am sorry I have none. I have felt so down since Indie said she is leaving. I still hope I can persuade her otherwise, but totally understand and agree with her reasoning. It's not fair, Jaq. What can we do to talk her into it? It will be as fun if she is not here.
Love the poem and you capture Indie's unique spirit and humour with finesse, Jaq. I'm so sad, I'm not even sure I can manage an och aye the nu today.
Much love,
Julie :-)
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Obviously a sixer, so I am sorry I have none. I have felt so down since Indie said she is leaving. I still hope I can persuade her otherwise, but totally understand and agree with her reasoning. It's not fair, Jaq. What can we do to talk her into it? It will be as fun if she is not here.
Love the poem and you capture Indie's unique spirit and humour with finesse, Jaq. I'm so sad, I'm not even sure I can manage an och aye the nu today.
Much love,
Julie :-)
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Awww Julie I feel the same girlie. :(. That bloody pride of hers!! Mind you, that's what I love about her and what makes her Indie. Let's hope we can work on her. Thanks for the review hon, Jaq xx
Comment from donaldww
Cool. The site seems to be replete with poems about comings and goings of people on FS. And now this one for Indie Skreet. To me, she just got here, so it was a short lived visit.
I have seen some of her poems decrying mistreatment by some people, but honestly don't have a clue what's going on with that.
In the poem, it says you are her partner, therefore you must know what's going on. Which makes sense, since you've written this poem.
Enjoyable tribute to your friend!
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Cool. The site seems to be replete with poems about comings and goings of people on FS. And now this one for Indie Skreet. To me, she just got here, so it was a short lived visit.
I have seen some of her poems decrying mistreatment by some people, but honestly don't have a clue what's going on with that.
In the poem, it says you are her partner, therefore you must know what's going on. Which makes sense, since you've written this poem.
Enjoyable tribute to your friend!
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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She's my friend Donald. Partners in crime only :). I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Jaq x
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is very well-written; it speaks frankly on a subject I'm CONFUSED about. She's being banned from FS? As I told Indie the other day, when I FIRST find my self being offended by a poem, I simply move on.
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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This is very well-written; it speaks frankly on a subject I'm CONFUSED about. She's being banned from FS? As I told Indie the other day, when I FIRST find my self being offended by a poem, I simply move on.
Comment Written 09-May-2013
reply by the author on 09-May-2013
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Yip Janice a few times her poems have been binned by the powers that be, just for her honesty. Thanks for your review. :) Jaq xx
