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Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Who do you think you are?"All of my poems of release.
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Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is really passionate. Without reading the author's note, i would easily have assumed you were talking about some evil pastors and counselors who take advantage of distraught women. very well done
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This is really passionate. Without reading the author's note, i would easily have assumed you were talking about some evil pastors and counselors who take advantage of distraught women. very well done
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you so much Perp xx
Comment from 3boysrule
Very good poem. Strong images are portrayed of someone abused, taken and hurt. I think your message was clear and I like how you ended it. Great job:-)
Dee
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Very good poem. Strong images are portrayed of someone abused, taken and hurt. I think your message was clear and I like how you ended it. Great job:-)
Dee
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you so much Dee. Your review means a lot. Jaq xx
Comment from L. Sherman
You know, I'll say that my fiance and I met online playing Yahoo! Pool years ago, and I was lucky. Unfortunately, there are many out there who do as you claim, and it's a heinous thing. I actually really liked how this one flowed and think the structure worked well, especially to accent certain passages. Nice writing. :)
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You know, I'll say that my fiance and I met online playing Yahoo! Pool years ago, and I was lucky. Unfortunately, there are many out there who do as you claim, and it's a heinous thing. I actually really liked how this one flowed and think the structure worked well, especially to accent certain passages. Nice writing. :)
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Comment Written 06-May-2013
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Thank you so much I did have a particularly bad experience where the police were involved. I swore then I would not end up like that again. Sometimes tho' you fall for a facade or something you want it to be. Jaq xx
Comment from Indie Skreet
friggin' friggin' hell girl - I want to six this more than you know! There are sexual predators all around but you are aware so will never again be taken in by a fraud of any tongue :) and I poke mine out at him of course. Love this write - it is what it is all about...... expression, release and lastly but not least oh so sweet tasting revenge lol lol lol You make my heart sing and I love the song :) luv ya of course, Indie xxxx
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friggin' friggin' hell girl - I want to six this more than you know! There are sexual predators all around but you are aware so will never again be taken in by a fraud of any tongue :) and I poke mine out at him of course. Love this write - it is what it is all about...... expression, release and lastly but not least oh so sweet tasting revenge lol lol lol You make my heart sing and I love the song :) luv ya of course, Indie xxxx
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Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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They say revenge is a dish best served cold. This has taken some time to serve up girlie. Thank you for your great review. Xx
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oh well my little friend, better late than never lol xx
