My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Forgive = Live."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend this is well written god is the only one that can give us true forgiveness and really mean it which is what we need this is well written with a very good message well done regards Jill
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013
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Yes my friend this is well written god is the only one that can give us true forgiveness and really mean it which is what we need this is well written with a very good message well done regards Jill
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much Jill, as always your review is much appreciated. Jaq x
Comment from Rondeno
A powerful declaration of faith in the True God, this well-constructed poem scorns false prophets. I especially liked the recurring mono-rhyme. Highly proficient!
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013
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A powerful declaration of faith in the True God, this well-constructed poem scorns false prophets. I especially liked the recurring mono-rhyme. Highly proficient!
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much for everything mo chara :) Jaq xxx
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de nada, mo chara
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On the contrary Meehal xx
