My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "In their shoes."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from jmdg1954
People are good at keeping things pent up inside. I know, I'm one. So just be yourself, you never know the troubles one may carry around. Rather then wanting to be in there shoes, go out and make yourself a better person, caring and giving. Go out and try to make yourself successful, rather then jealous of the one next to you. You're wasting time...
Great poetry.... John
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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People are good at keeping things pent up inside. I know, I'm one. So just be yourself, you never know the troubles one may carry around. Rather then wanting to be in there shoes, go out and make yourself a better person, caring and giving. Go out and try to make yourself successful, rather then jealous of the one next to you. You're wasting time...
Great poetry.... John
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much for your insightful review John. Xx
Comment from mumsyone
A great nonet and a good entry for the contest. We never know what others are going through, so it's best not to judge them by what we see. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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A great nonet and a good entry for the contest. We never know what others are going through, so it's best not to judge them by what we see. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Thank you so very much mumsyone. Appreciate your time. :) Jaq x
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Love the artwork of the old boots. This is a good Nonet about not judging a book by the cover unless you've taken the time to read it, or as you walk a mile in their shoes,
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Love the artwork of the old boots. This is a good Nonet about not judging a book by the cover unless you've taken the time to read it, or as you walk a mile in their shoes,
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Thank you Pearl much appreciated xx
Comment from lorijean
The world would look different in some else shoes, a great little verse, the picture is great, it made me think of a song I once heard....
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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The world would look different in some else shoes, a great little verse, the picture is great, it made me think of a song I once heard....
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Thanks again lorijean xx
Comment from Indie Skreet
excellent message in this one Jaq and done in this form is not easy to sound natural - this does. A little empathy for one and other sounds a good way to go - so easy to judge isn't it. lots of love my thoughtful friend, Indie xx
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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excellent message in this one Jaq and done in this form is not easy to sound natural - this does. A little empathy for one and other sounds a good way to go - so easy to judge isn't it. lots of love my thoughtful friend, Indie xx
Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much my friend hope you are well today, love you xxx
Comment from closetpoetjester
I agree. No matter how something may look to us, we have no idea until we were in that exact position how we'd feel.
Its easy to stand in judgement of others. As humans I think we all tend to do it. We pigeon hole and stereo type without getting to know the real person underneath. You summed it up quite simply but cleverly in this Nonet and I really liked the finish. Clever girl.
Hugs P
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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I agree. No matter how something may look to us, we have no idea until we were in that exact position how we'd feel.
Its easy to stand in judgement of others. As humans I think we all tend to do it. We pigeon hole and stereo type without getting to know the real person underneath. You summed it up quite simply but cleverly in this Nonet and I really liked the finish. Clever girl.
Hugs P
xx
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Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Thanks again for a great review P, hugs Jaq xxx
Comment from reconciled
That's it....nut shelled. When I'm in my right mind...I try to reason the motive behind a question...action...rarely am I successful...usually I re-act...then regret. -smile- imagine the attitude adjustment...if we spent a weekend in someone less fortunes shoes....hmm..lol Good stuff Jaq love you Michael
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That's it....nut shelled. When I'm in my right mind...I try to reason the motive behind a question...action...rarely am I successful...usually I re-act...then regret. -smile- imagine the attitude adjustment...if we spent a weekend in someone less fortunes shoes....hmm..lol Good stuff Jaq love you Michael
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Comment Written 25-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2013
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Yes indeed Michael, it would put a different perspective on a lot of things. Love ya too, Jaq xx
