Comment from vkmack

Excellent

This is great! Really enjoyed it, and you have some good points about aging. It ain't over until it's really, really over. Enjoy the time we have. The writing here is stylish without being flowery--a big plus. Looks like a fighter to me! Good luck.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Apr-2013

Thanks for the great review.

Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Excellent

Hello mystery writer. You tell your story well as to reflect on self-age in accordance with the passing of the seasons. Stretching to see the positives. I know that feeling all to well. My worst enemy these days is the mirror heh heh. Good telling of your story and good format. good luck and cheers.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2013

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from lorijean

Excellent

Superb look at life as we get older, with a great sense of humour, and of course a sense of what the hell can we do about anyway.....

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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from allborn66

Excellent

This is a very interesting piece. The poems go well with the prose. The them is clear in both. I really enjoyed this piece. The picture is a good fit.
Barbara

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 Comment Written 09-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013

thanks for reviewing.