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Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "Indiscreet"
All of my poems of release.

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Comment from Rondeno
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Brave, my friend. And very well-rhymed. It's what one might call "a fine example of polemical poetry". And an excellent display of loyalty to a friend.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    Thank you Meehal as always your words are much appreciated xxx
Comment from Black_Oxygen
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This is a well written poetic tribute. I too am an
"Indie" fan. She would admire, as I do, this poem
The attached photo is a befitting accent that
enhances the message. Thank You for your creation.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    Cheers Black_Oxygen I've shown her it ;-) xxx Thanks for your review my friend
Comment from adewpearl
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What did she say that got her in trouble? good use of abcb rhyme including the clever pairing of writer/smite her
effective commentary stating your argument with conviction
Brooke

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    Thanks Brooke she was attacked by someone but when she did a fun write it was assumed it was about this person even tho she stated it was fiction. The other person wasn't warned for their comments tho. As far as I can tell that's it. Thanks for a great review xxx
reply by adewpearl on 06-Apr-2013
    I looked up her name in the find a profile section and it's still there though the account is not available - which most likely means she is temporarily suspended, which happens all the time. People are usually back within one day
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    Thanks Brooke I do hope so, I already miss TammyGail terribly xx
Comment from gazzagodbod
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Bravo bravo the site.is a far poorer place without our.indie she is so talented and unique it's ludicrous she's gone like banning Adele from the music world sigh worth tan stars I have only 5 xxgazzaxx

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    So true gazza let's hope sense prevails and that she is reinstated soon. Thank you for your support for my poem xx
Comment from J. Dark
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Got to agree with you on this one, Jaq. A sense of humour is invaluable and there are not enough humour writers on here as it is. Thank you for writing this wonderful poem in plight of a great writer and a great friend I love the ray of sunshine line.

Kindest of regards,

Julie :-)

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    Thank you so much Julie. You know exactly what I mean with Indie. What you see is what your get and that is a fantastic sense of humour and a great talent. xxx
Comment from lorijean
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Does that really happen? where the free speech gone, love your poem, telling the truth and wonder where a fellow poet has gone......

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    It is happening and has in the past lorijean I don't like injustice. xx
reply by lorijean on 06-Apr-2013
    sounds like jealousy to me......
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    Indeed it does xx
Comment from Kiki12
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First of all, it's a very well written poem, nice flow, good unforced rhyme, very expressive. Now- wtf is wrong with this site??? Why is she gone? She's a talented artist, and not the one sending vindictive personal attacks in her reviews. I don't understand, but I thank you for writing this, as I will be sure to use my voice...
Kiki

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    Thanks Kiki, Indie will be very grateful to you. She is a very talented lady who has been targetted but nothing was done xxx
reply by Kiki12 on 06-Apr-2013
    She is indeed- she inspired my poem 'Mosaic' yesterday, as she is always the one gem being criticized around here.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    Yes and it's so unfair xxx
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
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Jaq I am a bit lost on this one not with the rhyme or rhythm just the context Maybe you might fill me in a bit ok The write as always was right on Your talent always shines through
tk

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    Thanks TK she' s a particularly gifted and. outspoken writer my friend. I just dislike witch hunts and having your freedom of speech censored xx
Comment from October21
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Oh

MY

GOD

I've only just met Indie! And already she's been banned? For what? For being talented? Is it worth me having a go at Tom? Or not? How long do they ban you for?

She HAS to be coming back!!!

This site is SO unfair!!! They're targeting the wrong people!!!

Sorry, I'm contacting Tom. If you see my account is muted you know it's because I got careless.

This ISN'T ON!!!!

(Angry!)

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    Shenel no worries hon she will be back at some point. I'm hoping it's not permanent xxxx
reply by October21 on 06-Apr-2013
    I've sent Tom a message anyway. I'm not very happy at the moment!!!

    Hope I don't get banned now LOL!! Xx
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    Me too hon. You shouldn't be as you are only showing support. There will be anotuer outcry if that happens xx
reply by October21 on 06-Apr-2013
    I know LOL! You, Phyllis and Mark will all have your jaws open!!!:-) I haven't known Indie for long but she's a good friend and lovely person- always great to chat to, right?:-) and she doesn't deserve this at all!:-) xx
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    So true girlie :))) xxxx I may be close too after this xxx
reply by October21 on 06-Apr-2013
    It pushed me over the edge, I think, because it was Indie! Any of my friends and I get funny about it. Not like I would swear at Tom, but I did go on a bit LOL!:-) xx
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    Lol Shenel Indie is very grateful but wouldn't want you in trouble xxx
reply by October21 on 06-Apr-2013
    Don't tell her!!! Don't worry I didn't say anything too bad:) Xx
Comment from reconciled
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117 hits...and seven reviews...hmm... I knew it was coming... Again..the man was wrong for they he approached...should have passed it by...if not to his liking. Now look at the snow ball grow....just a shame. Truth is...she bite him back...shouldn't have kept chewing on the pant leg. Tom...let her back in please. love Michael

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
    Thanks Michael, just like Tammy, Mark and Jonathan. Xxx
reply by reconciled on 06-Apr-2013
    I know...