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SFattempt
I really like your way of writing as i can relate so much to this poem, my comment would be is not to change anything really-love it!
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
Thanks so much for your lovely words xx
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Rondeno
Trapped in a prison of commitment, obligation and learned behavior, the poet questions the nature of our social relationships and how it can be that these responsibilities come to obscure our sense of self. A subtle but powerful poem.
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Comment Written 01-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
Thank you so much Meehal I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Jaq x
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