My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Dance of Love."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from adewpearl
lovely alliteration in quietly quiver
and in softly sensual
more excellent alliteration follows
beautiful descriptive detail that has strong sensory and sensual appeal
a wonderfully passionate poem that is endearingly tender at the same time :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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lovely alliteration in quietly quiver
and in softly sensual
more excellent alliteration follows
beautiful descriptive detail that has strong sensory and sensual appeal
a wonderfully passionate poem that is endearingly tender at the same time :-) Brooke
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much Brooke always appreciated xxx
Comment from reconciled
Enrikay swavay...madam Jaqulin (pretendallthisisspelledright)....My goodness this Spanish Stallion has certainly got your attention...slap me silly and start actin' straight....I'm Irish Jaq...and French....not Spanish.....write that down please love you Michael
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Enrikay swavay...madam Jaqulin (pretendallthisisspelledright)....My goodness this Spanish Stallion has certainly got your attention...slap me silly and start actin' straight....I'm Irish Jaq...and French....not Spanish.....write that down please love you Michael
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Lol thank you Michael I'll remember xxx
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playin'....have fun with I'm too sexy for myself...Enriky swavay......lol
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I knew you were :-) xxx
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I''i'' try to be careful now...lmbo-
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Lmao...you're fine. Love ya bro x
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend again this is well written and very romantic to this reads well full of imagery and feeling through the work well done I enjoyed regards Jill
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Yes my friend again this is well written and very romantic to this reads well full of imagery and feeling through the work well done I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much Jill, you are a good friend and I cherish your reviews. :) Jaq xx
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
You get better with each prose my dear Jaq Cee Your flow from your heart to your hand with expertise or should I say expert-tease hehehe
TK
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You get better with each prose my dear Jaq Cee Your flow from your heart to your hand with expertise or should I say expert-tease hehehe
TK
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Lol, thank you so much for your wonderful review and rating TK. Always good to hear from you :) Jaq xxx
Comment from L. Sherman
What a wonderful, sultry poem. Can definitely feel the passion in this one. I love the format, how it's a bit jagged and broken up. Great bits of alliteration scattered throughout gives it a cohesive quality. Great word choices make it sing. Song is a great addition.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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What a wonderful, sultry poem. Can definitely feel the passion in this one. I love the format, how it's a bit jagged and broken up. Great bits of alliteration scattered throughout gives it a cohesive quality. Great word choices make it sing. Song is a great addition.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thanks very much you review is so much appreciated. :) Jaq xx
Comment from Empathy
Almost hypnotic style...nicely crafted...conjours great images and emotion...I liked this a lot...and the picture is great too. Good work, well done. Cheers! E.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Almost hypnotic style...nicely crafted...conjours great images and emotion...I liked this a lot...and the picture is great too. Good work, well done. Cheers! E.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Awww thank you E, it means a lot to have your lovely review. :) Jaq xxx
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Jaq, a lovely sensual pull in this one. I enjoyed reading it very much. Well penned with strong imagery and hit of romance/ lust. You should of put it in the love poem contest girl!
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Hi Jaq, a lovely sensual pull in this one. I enjoyed reading it very much. Well penned with strong imagery and hit of romance/ lust. You should of put it in the love poem contest girl!
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Lol too late now Maureen :). Thanks for your wonderful words and your constant encouragement :) Jaq xxx
Comment from MelReyn
This is beautiful and sweet. Yes, there is the erotic side, but it isn't crass in anyway. It makes me think that the woman in inexperienced and a bit nervous, but happy too. I thought that this was well done. (Whew. I'm going to go take a cold shower now. LOL)
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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This is beautiful and sweet. Yes, there is the erotic side, but it isn't crass in anyway. It makes me think that the woman in inexperienced and a bit nervous, but happy too. I thought that this was well done. (Whew. I'm going to go take a cold shower now. LOL)
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Lol thanks for your fantastic review Mel. It's much appreciated :) Jaq xx
Comment from Indie Skreet
ooh girl and i wonder where you got that sexy imagination from lol. I love this - it is a great job and the imagery is perfect. Nothing to improve - perrrrrrrrfect :) warmly as always Indie xxx ps that should do it lol xx
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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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ooh girl and i wonder where you got that sexy imagination from lol. I love this - it is a great job and the imagery is perfect. Nothing to improve - perrrrrrrrfect :) warmly as always Indie xxx ps that should do it lol xx
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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LMAO Indie, from 'bossy bosses' to this in an afternoon. I needed some brightness today. Thank you so much for your fab review girlie, love ya ;-) xxx
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shit, it went through as a four star!!!!!!!!!!!! I am on my way lol
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lol Indie I didn't even look hahahaha xxx
Comment from lorijean
Beautiful, so sensual and love the reference to spanish guitars, it was full of sultry memories, I met and fell for a guitar playing man.............
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Beautiful, so sensual and love the reference to spanish guitars, it was full of sultry memories, I met and fell for a guitar playing man.............
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thank you lorijean your review is appreciated :) Jaq x
