My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "You thrill me."All of my poems of release.
23 total reviews
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
WHEW! Gotta have a cold shower after that romp! LOL- Loved it! Very sexy and sensuous. Very well written and presented- smooth easy read. Just perfect! Thanks so much for sharing! Betty
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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WHEW! Gotta have a cold shower after that romp! LOL- Loved it! Very sexy and sensuous. Very well written and presented- smooth easy read. Just perfect! Thanks so much for sharing! Betty
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Lol thanks Betty, glad it is having the desired effect ;-) Jaq xx
Comment from wanderlost
you set free
my burning desire
hidden for so long...
now it flows
as nectar does from
bountilful flowers
stacatto lines contribute to the flow of the poem. good free verse form! well done
Wanderlost
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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you set free
my burning desire
hidden for so long...
now it flows
as nectar does from
bountilful flowers
stacatto lines contribute to the flow of the poem. good free verse form! well done
Wanderlost
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thanks wanderlust, always nice to hear you thoughts. :) Jaq xx
Comment from Gungalo
greedily--
I taste your
essence too,
together we tumble
into satin covered bed
writhing,
moaning,
satisfying primal needs
you fill me
I possess you
completely
fulfilled,
for now...
Ah that's what I'm talking about. To be competed fulfilled for the time being. Wonderful girl and certainly top notch.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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greedily--
I taste your
essence too,
together we tumble
into satin covered bed
writhing,
moaning,
satisfying primal needs
you fill me
I possess you
completely
fulfilled,
for now...
Ah that's what I'm talking about. To be competed fulfilled for the time being. Wonderful girl and certainly top notch.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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High praise indeed Gungalo. Thank you so very much, it means a lot. :) Jaq xx
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Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
The ending statement does imply there will be another time. I'm not a poet but I feel safe in declaring this is a love poem. Good job. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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The ending statement does imply there will be another time. I'm not a poet but I feel safe in declaring this is a love poem. Good job. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thanks for reviewing Evelyn and for the love. Much appreciated. :) Jaq xx
Comment from GarthL
That's a hot one Jaq, sounds like that special one woke up and realised what he was missing. Very explicit and leaves no doubt that the union was mutually satisfying. Nothing like the feel of satin sheets. Well written and a reminder for this celibate what I'm missing! Maybe I shouldn't have read this one?! StaySafe, Garth
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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That's a hot one Jaq, sounds like that special one woke up and realised what he was missing. Very explicit and leaves no doubt that the union was mutually satisfying. Nothing like the feel of satin sheets. Well written and a reminder for this celibate what I'm missing! Maybe I shouldn't have read this one?! StaySafe, Garth
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Lol Garth thanks for reading and also for your continued support. Peace n Love my friend xx
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Lol Garth thanks for reading and also for your continued support. Peace n Love my friend xx
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Strange this reply came through twice Jaq?!
TreadLightly, Garthxox
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Strange this reply came through twice Jaq?!
TreadLightly, Garthxox
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Jaq, this is a wonderful sultry, steamy write. Which I enjoyed too much. Now I need a cold shower:)
But you penned it beautifully.
Thanks for sharing.
Marianne
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Hi Jaq, this is a wonderful sultry, steamy write. Which I enjoyed too much. Now I need a cold shower:)
But you penned it beautifully.
Thanks for sharing.
Marianne
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much for your wonderful review Maureen. Much appreciated as always. xxx
Comment from Indie Skreet
lol girl, I have a cold bath running. this is a great, sexy write - one for the boys methinks - for now xx ....................................................
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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lol girl, I have a cold bath running. this is a great, sexy write - one for the boys methinks - for now xx ....................................................
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Lol Indie, thanks as always, just following your lead ;-) Jaq xx
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actually girl, I have one sitting here for posting tomorrow called 'sexually disturbed' lol. everyone's going to think I'm a freakin' perv,especially as the one after is about a cyber-love lol lol and lol. Just as well I posted a photo of when I was younger, cos would hate for anyone to id me :D xx
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Hahahahaha I will look forward to them tomorrow then :) xxx
Been caught with cyber love... see my 'On-line Predator' or 'Narcisstic You'. xxxx
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lol xxx
Comment from Rondeno
In eloquent words of love, a woman tells of her passion for her man. The passion is carnal, but cannot be separated from the inchoate things, like the look in the lover's eyes. It's a beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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In eloquent words of love, a woman tells of her passion for her man. The passion is carnal, but cannot be separated from the inchoate things, like the look in the lover's eyes. It's a beautiful poem.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much mo chara, it's for a beautiful soul. Glad you enjoyed it :) Jaq xx
Comment from Debra White
Whoah! 'For now....' You're insatiable!
This makes fantastic reading.
Your words and how you've presented them, seem to tease the reader.
You've used some great alliteration throughout the poem; swept/suavely, solid/self, together/tumble.
I love how the passion is reciprocated, it balances the desire of the writer.
Brilliant! Debra :)
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Whoah! 'For now....' You're insatiable!
This makes fantastic reading.
Your words and how you've presented them, seem to tease the reader.
You've used some great alliteration throughout the poem; swept/suavely, solid/self, together/tumble.
I love how the passion is reciprocated, it balances the desire of the writer.
Brilliant! Debra :)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you so much Debra, a much appreciated and welcome review. :) Jaq xx
Comment from reconciled
"For now"...spoken like a natural woman.....-wink- ha ha...Hi Jaq....you lookin' girl Wonderful write you're on fire....don't let nobody put it out love you Michael
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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"For now"...spoken like a natural woman.....-wink- ha ha...Hi Jaq....you lookin' girl Wonderful write you're on fire....don't let nobody put it out love you Michael
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thanks Michael I am speechless at the six stars. Much love and hugs to you too :) Jaq xx
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Wooo woo....-smile-
