My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "Original Sin. "All of my poems of release.
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Comment from neharika.m
hi, the sadness of the poem permeates to the reader. The victims in such cases feel scarred for life, but they should be counselled that it is but another kind of assault and should not attach so much trauma to it. Of course its easy to say.. Loved the flow of your poem and appreciate giving voice to such an important issue.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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hi, the sadness of the poem permeates to the reader. The victims in such cases feel scarred for life, but they should be counselled that it is but another kind of assault and should not attach so much trauma to it. Of course its easy to say.. Loved the flow of your poem and appreciate giving voice to such an important issue.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Its something that happens more than people admit. Thanks for reading and reviewing xx
Comment from Jean Lutz
This is so, so sad and not what God had in mind when He looked on creation and declared, "All is good." If only sexual abuse victims could understand that they are not bad, just victims of evil. Some never recover.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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This is so, so sad and not what God had in mind when He looked on creation and declared, "All is good." If only sexual abuse victims could understand that they are not bad, just victims of evil. Some never recover.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Some don't Jean but others will conquer it. Thanks Jaq x
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Jaq Cee,
The poem is well done, and the rhyme scheme is excellent though a bit on the dark side. I guess I should have expected that from the title. The imagery is good and provides word pictures for the mind's eye to see. To be abused at eight is bad, but it should not spoil the rest of your life.
Curtis
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Jaq Cee,
The poem is well done, and the rhyme scheme is excellent though a bit on the dark side. I guess I should have expected that from the title. The imagery is good and provides word pictures for the mind's eye to see. To be abused at eight is bad, but it should not spoil the rest of your life.
Curtis
Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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It no longer defines who I am. I am exorcising the beast. Thanks for reading Jaq xx
Comment from reconciled
Hi Jaq.....-smile- Hope this isn't true....but it is true for many....i hear about it on Cnn and stuff. ya know, God created us as sexual beings...naked...unashamed...it is us who have made it shameful....because of stuff like this....any man...that could walk away after doing something like that....and survive himself...is reprobate. If you can do that to pure innocents...nothing is sacred to you....you have become a disease ...a danger to the life that surrounds you. alright, love you Michael
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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Hi Jaq.....-smile- Hope this isn't true....but it is true for many....i hear about it on Cnn and stuff. ya know, God created us as sexual beings...naked...unashamed...it is us who have made it shameful....because of stuff like this....any man...that could walk away after doing something like that....and survive himself...is reprobate. If you can do that to pure innocents...nothing is sacred to you....you have become a disease ...a danger to the life that surrounds you. alright, love you Michael
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Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Thanks for reafing and reviewing mu poem Michael, always appreciated love n stuff Jaq xx
Comment from mermaids
Your words have an impact on the reader and give a voice to thsoe who have been through sexual abuse. Excellent use of words and flow of lines.
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Your words have an impact on the reader and give a voice to thsoe who have been through sexual abuse. Excellent use of words and flow of lines.
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Comment Written 16-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2013
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Thank you mermaids. Jaq x
