Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

The message is clear and to the point. The passion of the writer is felt as the writer does a good job of tapping into the emotions of the reader. My attention is held from beginning to end. Nice work.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013

Thank you so much RR much appreciated as ever xx

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Ah what a lovely poem. I love the lines..to see you smile.. to hear you laugh... to watch your eyes twinkle...very nice. Believe it or not, that is what I like about my beau. I am 75 years old and love is still magical. Bless you. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013

Ahhh Angelface that sounds truly magical. My parents have been married 57yrs too. God bless you for reviewing. Thank you, Jaq xx

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Hey6, beautiful written free verse expressing love.

Favourite stanza....

I will wait for your love
I will wait for you...

to see you smile
to hear you laugh
to watch your
eyes twinkle

Great job and love the presentation to.

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013

Thanks a lot for a lovely review Tia xxx Jaq

Comment from GarthL

Excellent

Really beautiful Jaq, straight from your heart and straight to the point. An offering of such unconditional love and sentiment would be a hard resist I'd think. I hope he realises what a lucky fellow he is and makes the appropriate moves for you. Thanks for the great Mumford & Sons video, it complimented your poem completely. Well done, StayStrong, Garth

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013

PeacenLove to you as ever Garth. Great to have your thoughts on this, thanks for your continued support and reviews. I love Mumford and Sons :) Jaq xx

reply by GarthL on 13-Mar-2013

Cheers Jaq, if he doesn't come to his senses he needs his head read surely. I'm assuming this isn't fictional writing and I'm sorry if I'm wrong, please forgive me. LiveLove'n'Light, Garthxox

Comment from Scarbrems

Excellent

I like the simplicity of this. Clean lines, subtle, gentle phrases
"my love is free
without condition
reach out...
feel my need "

This verse is a cry from the heart, passion overflowing here in an outburst, contrasting with the restraint of emotion shown elsewhere. I like that. All in all, it stirred me. Well done

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013

Thank you so much emsey, I really appreciate your review. :) JAq xx

Comment from reconciled

Excellent

Wow...Jaq...just a brilliant write...sorry I'm out...I dont think I get as many as everybody else....this is front page..-wink- Somebody is a very lucky guy love you Michael

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013

Hi Michael, thanks hon, it's always a pleasure to hear your thoughts my friend. Love and hugs :) Jaq xx

reply by reconciled on 12-Mar-2013

back at ya....-smile-