My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 76 "New Love"All of my poems of release.
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Comment from judelesemann
A very soft and melodic poem. I like your progression of thought and passion. Very nicely written. Keep on writing. Be blessed, Jude
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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A very soft and melodic poem. I like your progression of thought and passion. Very nicely written. Keep on writing. Be blessed, Jude
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Jude your words are so much appreciated :) Jaq xx
Comment from Spike the second
Hello Jaq my friend.
What a lovely poem it is so beautiful and I love the song.
I bet it was such a special time and has given you such great memories.
very romantic indeed and such a lovely poem that is so well written.
Blessings
Spike
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Hello Jaq my friend.
What a lovely poem it is so beautiful and I love the song.
I bet it was such a special time and has given you such great memories.
very romantic indeed and such a lovely poem that is so well written.
Blessings
Spike
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Ahhhhh Spike, thank you for that, I will get around to repaying the compliment over the weekend. Take care my friend :) Jaq xx
Comment from Curt Mongold
The story of meeting someone and feeling that spark of love at first sight emotion shines through very well in this piece. It has very nice rhymes and the story is touching to any who have experienced this rush of excitement.
Well done,
Curt
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The story of meeting someone and feeling that spark of love at first sight emotion shines through very well in this piece. It has very nice rhymes and the story is touching to any who have experienced this rush of excitement.
Well done,
Curt
Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Curt, your review is always appreciated :) Jaq x
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, jaq cee, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful poem about finding love in that perfect moment when two souls connect, i enjoyed reading it
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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this is very well written, jaq cee, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful poem about finding love in that perfect moment when two souls connect, i enjoyed reading it
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
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Many thanks SWJ xx
Comment from beccabootie123
nicely written. a sweet story of love. good picture and color palate. formatted for easy reading. was held from the first word to the last. good work would like to read more
thank you
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nicely written. a sweet story of love. good picture and color palate. formatted for easy reading. was held from the first word to the last. good work would like to read more
thank you
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2013
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Much appreciated becca xx
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ahh it was nothing
