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Apologies for FanStory Use

For those rare occasions when you need to say sorry

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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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Great advice! Some folks are so touchy. I met two on this site. One man I blocked, the other disappeared on her own. I hope she does not reappear....

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Yep, so true. 😄
Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi Deniz22
This made me really smile What a beaut rant
I sm awake at 2.30 can't sleep and thought I would look at some FS poems and found this one and I must admit I found this very funny and whoever it is directed at , would or should be hiding
away perhaps never to write again Ha ha
But I actually think some people get very precious about their work and do not like any critical reviews ( despite it being just ordinary) and some reviewers are just plain picky and nit pick the smallest thing
Sometimes this site makes smile as it is quite competitive and one can see strong personalities arise, But I think most people here are pretty supportive of each other
Thanks for a good read
I give you a six for your effort and clever wording
Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Thank you! I've been here long enough to be on both sides of the coin. I remember one of my first reviews was almost a complete rewrite of the author's work! How pretentious and puffed up on my part!

    But I've also been the victim of several slash and burn critics! Usually, like me, they were newbies. My favs, are, the comma, cops.

    Hopefully, we can all learn?? A work in progress for me.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh dear, it seems like tempers might have raised and unintended words spouted out, an apology when genuine always helps, but we are all entitled to our own opinions and must not bend to the pressure, just to fit in, an epic write here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Thank you! I've been here long enough to be on both sides of the coin. I remember one of my first reviews was almost a complete rewrite of the author's work! How pretentious and puffed up on my part!

    But I've also been the victim of several slash and burn critics! Usually, like me, they were newbies. My favs, are, the comma, cops.

    Hopefully, we can all learn?? A work in progress for me.
Comment from royowen
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I think I've made so many boo boos in the years I've been here, but I would never deliberately hurt someone, nor be the source of discouragement, but I like your letter dear boy, well done Bro, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Thank you! I've been here long enough to be on both sides of the coin. I remember one of my first reviews was almost a complete rewrite of the author's work! How pretentious and puffed up on my part!

    But I've also been the victim of several slash and burn critics! Usually, like me, they were newbies. My favs, are, the comma, cops.

    Hopefully, we can all learn?? A work in progress for me.
reply by royowen on 16-Nov-2020
    Heh heh love them
Comment from palmart
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I find your comments a bit tough but it is part of the freedom to say whatever you want to say. I write after I read and I found that several not-so-good writings usually have something to valuate. Again, Your point of view has some points that are not only useful, but also, instructive.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Thank you! I've been here long enough to be on both sides of the coin. I remember one of my first reviews was almost a complete rewrite of the author's work! How pretentious and puffed up on my part!

    But I've also been the victim of several slash and burn critics! Usually, like me, they were newbies. My favs, are, the comma, cops.

    Hopefully, we can all learn?? A work in progress for me.
reply by palmart on 16-Nov-2020
    You´re perfectly right!
    Who can affirm that they are a finished piece of art? There is always a brushstroke to be given...

    Have a great week!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
    Amen!
Comment from tfawcus
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Interesting. Different people join FanStory with different agendas. Some genuinely want to learn new skills, others are just looking for a forum for their self-expression. It would be helpful if there was a simple way for people to indicate to which camp they belong. Perhaps angst of the type you describe would then be a rarer occurrence. In any event, you've satirised the situation in an entertaining post. Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    I like your suggestion, but I'm not sure we at first know our own motivations clearly enough to accept a brand.

    In any case, thank you! I've been here long enough to be on both sides of the coin. I remember one of my first reviews was almost a complete rewrite of the author's work! How pretentious and puffed up on my part!

    But I've also been the victim of several slash and burn critics! Usually, like me, they were newbies. My favs, are, the comma, cops.
    Hopefully, we can all learn?? A work in progress for me.
Comment from pome lover
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This must be free verse? It read like prose, to me. But what do I...
This is humor blasting good naturedly through gritted teeth and billowing smoke. And free advice and a tongue in cheek response letter to boot. Quite a deal. And quite a post. It must have been therapeutic - literary therapy at its best. Works like a charm? That's good to hear. I'll have to try it. Thanks for the blue print.
pome lover

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Sorry about the mislabeling. I often forget to attach one. In any case,thank you!
    I've been here long enough to be on both sides of the coin. I remember one of my first reviews was almost a complete rewrite of the author's work! How pretentious and puffed up on my part!

    But I've also been the victim of several slash and burn critics! Usually, like me, they were newbies. My favs, are, the comma, cops.
    Hopefully, we can all learn?? A work in progress for me.
reply by pome lover on 16-Nov-2020
    I know what you mean about slash and burn - I just got one today for my contest poem and I'm not going to answer her. She said I had archaic endings - whatever that means -(among other things)
    I, love, "coma, cops," !
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Silent responses say a lot and save our senses. 😄
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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SSSSSStupendous! Wickedly witty--spot-on! If I had been out of sixes I'd have held off a week--no way to auto-five this tour de force of snark. Priceless! Excuse me--gotta grab this for my bookcase. Cheerssssss. LIZ

(Did you classify this as poetry intentionally as an extra dig to StoryLand's contingent of pompous poets?)

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    The classification was unintentional but now see the value of same, thanks to you. And thank you! I've been here long enough to be on both sides of this coin.
    I remember one of my first reviews was almost a complete rewrite of the author's work! How pretentious and puffed up on my part!

    But I've also been the victim of several slash and burn critics! Usually, like me, they were newbies. My favs, are, the comma, cops.
    Hopefully, we can all learn?? A work in progress for me. Thanks Liz
Comment from Mary Wakeford
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Only because I am out of sixes! I am laughing as I read this and from two perspectives, or on both ends of Joe Biden's proverbial gun as you so aptly put it. This was the 2 center yet!!

 Comment Written 28-May-2016


reply by the author on 30-May-2016
    Thank you Mary Wakeford ( a great brand name for anything...how about chocolates? I can see it now, little white boxes containing 6 overpriced chocolates....and there must be a tagline...hmm, lets see: Mary Wakeford chocolates, made for the truly discriminating. That line alone guarantees a spike in sales to all extremists groups. BTW, I love your stuff...thanks for reading mine. :)
Comment from Joy Graham
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This is very funny and hit the spot for me today! I know I'm two years late in reviewing, but I was going through the recognized works. Sadly, none of my posts are listed. I found myself giggling as I read this very long post. I don't normally read long posts, but yours was fascinating. I like your style and humorous approach :) You allowed me to dare to think out loud all the things I try to keep hidden lol! Good one.

 Comment Written 13-May-2015


reply by the author on 16-May-2015
    Better late than never...glad you got a giggle out of it....exactly why I wrote it. Some on here take themselves a little too seriously but maybe that's a part of the learning process. I'll take a loo k at some things you wrote and then rip it to shreds....I mean, perhaps I can offer some helpful comments...just don't be better than me....:) Thanks, Dennis