My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 88 "Broken Ballerina."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from Black_Oxygen
I cannot see, nor
feel my way,
True love I always
miss.
One day I'll heal and
trust again,
or be lost in time's
abyss
This poetry flows very nicely. It is easy to read and
held my attention from start to finish. Thank You for
your creation.
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2013
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I cannot see, nor
feel my way,
True love I always
miss.
One day I'll heal and
trust again,
or be lost in time's
abyss
This poetry flows very nicely. It is easy to read and
held my attention from start to finish. Thank You for
your creation.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much B_O always appreciated. :) Jaq x
