Trouble - Flight Fright
These are REVIVED chapters - the reviews are old ones. :)42 total reviews
Comment from doggymad
Brilliant write. I haven't read this one before so it seems you are getting chapters sorted.
Great description of the flight and the cute Luke.
The switch of emotions was swift but effective drawing the reader back to the purpose of the mercy mission
hugs
Freda xx
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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Brilliant write. I haven't read this one before so it seems you are getting chapters sorted.
Great description of the flight and the cute Luke.
The switch of emotions was swift but effective drawing the reader back to the purpose of the mercy mission
hugs
Freda xx
Comment Written 11-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015
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My friend, I am thrilled you liked it! Thank you!
Comment from Stalking Wolf
It is said siblings, especially twins can feel each others pain and such, could soul mates as well, this chapter seems to say that it is possible. Cool.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2013
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It is said siblings, especially twins can feel each others pain and such, could soul mates as well, this chapter seems to say that it is possible. Cool.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2013
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Regardless of the fact that the story is fiction, some of it is true and some of it reflects my thinking; this one area I find challenging sometimes, but I know it is true too.
Comment from mshirachot
Okay...LOL...so, I am reading these chapters in reverse. (I was visiting family over the holidays and had no computer access to review so I started at the most recent post and am going backwards. I'll definitely need to jump back a few pages to get back on track.
More great writing. Dead? What? Now the most recent chapter makes more sense in what the "psychic" writer on here said. hmmm.
Thanks for sharing this!!!
Blessings! (((((((((((((((Dawn))))))))))))
Marsha
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013
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Okay...LOL...so, I am reading these chapters in reverse. (I was visiting family over the holidays and had no computer access to review so I started at the most recent post and am going backwards. I'll definitely need to jump back a few pages to get back on track.
More great writing. Dead? What? Now the most recent chapter makes more sense in what the "psychic" writer on here said. hmmm.
Thanks for sharing this!!!
Blessings! (((((((((((((((Dawn))))))))))))
Marsha
Comment Written 01-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013
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Blessings to you, Marsha. Okay, now you are confusing ME...LOL. I am happy you are enjoying it, ANY way you enjoy it. Thanks for a great review, my friend. :)
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Dawn,
Now you really have me intrigued. In a previous review I stated I was sure it was all a scam, a brilliant piece of deceptive writing. Now I am less sure, but whatever, it is a story that I must pursue to the end, and that is what good writing is all about.
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013
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Dear Dawn,
Now you really have me intrigued. In a previous review I stated I was sure it was all a scam, a brilliant piece of deceptive writing. Now I am less sure, but whatever, it is a story that I must pursue to the end, and that is what good writing is all about.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 01-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2013
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I'm so happy you feel that way - thank you for a lovely review, Reg.
Comment from artemis53
"coincidence is highly unlikely." That is a core belief of mine that is backed up by close to 25 years of nursing. This story continues to intrigue me. Yes. It's written impeccably but the subject fascinates me. To me it's that age old saying of "Some say 'why' and I say why not.'"
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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"coincidence is highly unlikely." That is a core belief of mine that is backed up by close to 25 years of nursing. This story continues to intrigue me. Yes. It's written impeccably but the subject fascinates me. To me it's that age old saying of "Some say 'why' and I say why not.'"
Comment Written 31-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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So true - in my experience, I could not agree more. (That's part of the "truth" in this series, and you are so insightful, my friend.) Thank you very much. I'm so glad you are enjoying it - we are coming up to the last few parts.
Comment from Sasha
I vaguely recall the previous post and cannot comment on the revisions. I can say this is very well written and you have completely captured my love of this story. I enjoyed this very much.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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I vaguely recall the previous post and cannot comment on the revisions. I can say this is very well written and you have completely captured my love of this story. I enjoyed this very much.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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Yes, oh yes! Thank you, my friend - I'm so glad you are enjoying this, because I am loving every minute of writing it.
Comment from alexisleech
When you suddenly connect to someone, especially if you have nobody special in your life, the next anxiety is that they may not be there in the future. Instead of embracing the moment, you worry that the 'moment' may end, and the connection is there no more. I remember it well when I fell in love with my husband thirty years ago. Where is your concern coming from? Is he suicidal? Or has he an illness? There has to be a reason why you worry so much about his future.
Whatever the reason, I hope you can look forward to friendship in the future, and you can rest easy knowing he's okay.
Alexis x
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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When you suddenly connect to someone, especially if you have nobody special in your life, the next anxiety is that they may not be there in the future. Instead of embracing the moment, you worry that the 'moment' may end, and the connection is there no more. I remember it well when I fell in love with my husband thirty years ago. Where is your concern coming from? Is he suicidal? Or has he an illness? There has to be a reason why you worry so much about his future.
Whatever the reason, I hope you can look forward to friendship in the future, and you can rest easy knowing he's okay.
Alexis x
Comment Written 31-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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Thank you, Alexis - it's in the earlier parts, actually. He's disappeared off the site for many days after I changed my mind about meeting him right away. (But you do realize it is fiction, sprinkled with truths, right?) I'm so glad you are enjoying it.
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I did wonder because I had a similar situation with someone here. Glad to say a lovely friendship has resulted, although I still refuse to meet. So I know this is very believable!
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Writingfundimension
Your opening thoughts have a special resonance for me, Dawn. I used to do psychic readings professionally. The glimpses (or visions) were often confusing to interpret for the client. I realize now that it was a form of remote viewing (something I hope to explore more in this new year). You hope you get it right, but must release and let it be what it is through the limitations of the mind's filters. It's heartbreaking to connect with someone on a spiritual level, deeply and thoroughly, without the elements in place on the physical level.
Well, you can see this one made me think LOL. Great write, my friend.
Hugs, Bev
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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Your opening thoughts have a special resonance for me, Dawn. I used to do psychic readings professionally. The glimpses (or visions) were often confusing to interpret for the client. I realize now that it was a form of remote viewing (something I hope to explore more in this new year). You hope you get it right, but must release and let it be what it is through the limitations of the mind's filters. It's heartbreaking to connect with someone on a spiritual level, deeply and thoroughly, without the elements in place on the physical level.
Well, you can see this one made me think LOL. Great write, my friend.
Hugs, Bev
Comment Written 31-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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Oh I am so, so happy to see your reaction to this part, Bev - I can't say too much because I don't want to give it away, but you, especially will enjoy what's coming, I think (hope). Thank you very much, my faithful friend!
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You're so very welcome, Dawn. I can't wait to find out what you've got up your sleeve!! XXx
Comment from w0manp0et
Hi Dawn,
Well, well--this is some powerful writing. It's listed as fiction, but I kept feeling like I should call 9-1-1, because someone needs a hand, the narrator or the individual she's referring to, I'm not sure which.
Great job! This is a mesmerizing tale.
Write on,
WP
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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Hi Dawn,
Well, well--this is some powerful writing. It's listed as fiction, but I kept feeling like I should call 9-1-1, because someone needs a hand, the narrator or the individual she's referring to, I'm not sure which.
Great job! This is a mesmerizing tale.
Write on,
WP
Comment Written 31-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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I'm so glad you are enjoying it! Thank you very much for this wonderful review.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Dawn, there is no such things as coincidences,everything has an order. Certainly there are different choices and paths,but they all end up in the same place. I'm thinking that this man might be too close for you to read straight,maybe your too emotionally attached. Your letting your truth slip because of needing to want so much. Anyway Lorri sounds like a driven individual,great to have a friend that cares enough to pester,but that was her job, to get you here. He's not dead, you'd know!! For sure you'd know,wouldn't you? Stay safe everything will work out the way it is supposed to. Take me on the journey, it's getting to edgy on the sidelines. take care my friend,have a safe,healthy,happy 2013 the rest will fall into place. kindest wishes James xx
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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Hi Dawn, there is no such things as coincidences,everything has an order. Certainly there are different choices and paths,but they all end up in the same place. I'm thinking that this man might be too close for you to read straight,maybe your too emotionally attached. Your letting your truth slip because of needing to want so much. Anyway Lorri sounds like a driven individual,great to have a friend that cares enough to pester,but that was her job, to get you here. He's not dead, you'd know!! For sure you'd know,wouldn't you? Stay safe everything will work out the way it is supposed to. Take me on the journey, it's getting to edgy on the sidelines. take care my friend,have a safe,healthy,happy 2013 the rest will fall into place. kindest wishes James xx
Comment Written 31-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2012
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James, it's fiction, most of it. I've told some reviewers already because I must have slipped up somehow - not very many reviewers thought it was created, they all thought it was real. Bless you for caring so much, and for offering such comforting words - you are a terrific friend. Thank you.