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Viewing comments for Chapter 103 "Sands of Time."
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Slythytove2
You sure found the right picture. The poem is particularly poignant and correctly short. You made your point and kept it straight and simple. Very good. I betting you're a wiz at Haiku.
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
Thanks for your kind review Slythytove2 :) Jaq x
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Joy Graham
I like the way you shaped the words into an image of an hourglass. You bring out some very good thing to think about. I try my best not to think of my life's hourglass running out of sand. It's depressing. Very good poem, though.
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Comment Written 20-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2012
Thank you so much Joy, much appreciated :) Jaq x
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