My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 119 "The Hardest Goodbye."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from Scribbler67
A very evocative poem, beautifully expressed in a most unusual poetic style.
The carefully chosen words give the work great substance, and the sentiments are conveyed very clearly. I particularly like the final stanza '...I need to fly, go forth and find my way.' Most expressive, and a very apt and well-considered title.
Most enjoyable.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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A very evocative poem, beautifully expressed in a most unusual poetic style.
The carefully chosen words give the work great substance, and the sentiments are conveyed very clearly. I particularly like the final stanza '...I need to fly, go forth and find my way.' Most expressive, and a very apt and well-considered title.
Most enjoyable.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you scribbler, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Your review means a lot. :) Jaq x
Comment from clsandau
A powerful poem describing how difficult it is to say goodbye to someone so important in our lives. Your poem runs smoothly and sounds like you've come to terms with yourself through this write. Nice set up too. Well done. Blessings, Carol
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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A powerful poem describing how difficult it is to say goodbye to someone so important in our lives. Your poem runs smoothly and sounds like you've come to terms with yourself through this write. Nice set up too. Well done. Blessings, Carol
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for your lovely review and yes, I'm getting there. :) Jaq x
Comment from Jamezy
A beautiful verse Jaq Cee.... Very powerful work.... Faultless through my eyes... Your a very gifted lady indeed... Go find yourself my friend.. Your work gets better with every passing day... Your overflow with emotion , have so much to offer... Great things shall come from you.... All you need do is believe in yourself , in your capabilities and in your self worth.... You are loved my friend... Here for you always..... x
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A beautiful verse Jaq Cee.... Very powerful work.... Faultless through my eyes... Your a very gifted lady indeed... Go find yourself my friend.. Your work gets better with every passing day... Your overflow with emotion , have so much to offer... Great things shall come from you.... All you need do is believe in yourself , in your capabilities and in your self worth.... You are loved my friend... Here for you always..... x
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thanks for your wonderful and insightful review James. You know how where I am if needed. :) Jaq x
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You know where I am and how to find me if needed, is what I meant to type. :)
Comment from Katherine2
Self love is so important, sometimes we need to just step back and give ourselves space. It is hard to let go of friends that may not be in our best interest to have as a friend. It is difficult to let go. Love yourself.~Katherine.
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Self love is so important, sometimes we need to just step back and give ourselves space. It is hard to let go of friends that may not be in our best interest to have as a friend. It is difficult to let go. Love yourself.~Katherine.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you Katherine, that's the road I'm travelling now. Your review is much appreciated. :) Jaq x
Comment from el twelve
very well written, it was touching after reading your notes. That must have been hard but to be able to write is so therapeutic, thanks for sharing
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very well written, it was touching after reading your notes. That must have been hard but to be able to write is so therapeutic, thanks for sharing
Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much for that el, it's much appreciated. Yes it was a very hard decision to make. :) Jaq x
Comment from Cedar
Your words are so true. We do need to find our own way in life. To be led around by others is not a good thing. And, as you said, we have to say good-bye occasionally. It's just the cycle of life. Great job. Bill
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Your words are so true. We do need to find our own way in life. To be led around by others is not a good thing. And, as you said, we have to say good-bye occasionally. It's just the cycle of life. Great job. Bill
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Thanks so much Bill it's easy to hide behind a facade instead of taking your own steps. Thanks for your kind review. :) Jaq x
Comment from Scarbrems
Oh Jaq it can be so difficult to move on, and you are taking the right approach judging by this excellent poem in which you share your emotions in a gentle way. A thoughtful and touching piece.
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Oh Jaq it can be so difficult to move on, and you are taking the right approach judging by this excellent poem in which you share your emotions in a gentle way. A thoughtful and touching piece.
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2012
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Ah thank you emsey, it was a hard decision but a necessary one. Your review is much appreciated. :) Jaq x
