Comment from angel123

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem and I understood your humorous message. Your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts and I wish you luck in the contest.

Angel123

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Thanks for the read and comment Jax

Comment from Bojenn

Exceptional

The intensity of the picture and the few words make for a great combination. Fun, alluring, energetic and sultry, but not too revealing, all makes for a great poem.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012

Thank you so much. A six is such a prize. This is a wonderful compliment. I am glad you enjoyed my work.

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Sexy
Slinky
Red-hot
Lady

And that she was for sure. If they were watching her then they were surely wishing they were way back when. Beautiful write.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thanks Gun. Glad you like it

reply by Gungalo on 28-Nov-2012

Smile.

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

YHAAAAAAA

reply by Gungalo on 28-Nov-2012

Sly one you are!!

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Your poem is in excellent syllable count and structure to adhere to contest rules
I like the alliteration in your opening lines
and the rhyme in the couplet is strong
good alliteration in watched and wished and leer is the perfect verb choice here :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

wow no red ped. this a first .love it jimmy

Comment from mystery poet

Excellent

This one is hot. Rich red background.
Lady with deep red rose in black hair.
A bewitching look about her. Nice scene
you set and theme is deserves applause.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thanks so much for such a great review glad you liked it

reply by mystery poet on 28-Nov-2012

Yeap! Best wishes...

Comment from Deorre Leonard

Excellent

Great poem the picture goes well with the poem. It has a really smooth flow the structure is good. thanks for sharing. Deorre

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thanks so much for such a great review

Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

oh wow love the picture and great sensual approach you captured my friend and the words make for a great read thank you so much and all the best gazza

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Gazza Thanks so much love your reviews

Comment from Val Crisson

Excellent

This is a great entry, which tells so much in so few words. One of the few that actually has the last two lines rhyme. Good luck in the contest - so sad dirty old men are still an issue.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thanks so much for the read and comment

Comment from sgalletti

Excellent

Ah yes, the pin-up girls! The sirens and actresses way back then were, in fact saucier and sexier than any who attempt to flaunt their stuff in this day and age. Good, fun piece with some satire. Best of luck, Sue

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thanks so much for such nice comments

Comment from terry drake

Excellent

Well it was obvious to me that the image you weave with your verse is very striking. The poem was well written to comply with the challenge.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012

Thanks so much. I am always glad to get a good review from you. Thanks