Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

I like it very much. It's difficult to muster a feeling in 20 to 25 syllables; however, you managed. It could mean a number of different things to different people. Good Luck. Robin

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012

Thank you so much Robin your review is appreciated.

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Sitting here I cry
For a life not fully lived
Wondering what went wrong
Anguish pours from my soul

wonderful written naani poem written in perfect 25 syllables. I could feel your emotions through this poem.

Well done

Regards
Tia

GL

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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012

Thank you so much once again Tia.

Comment from terry drake

Excellent

Your free verse poems has a lot anguish in it for being so short. I found it interesting and heart felt with pain to erase the torture in our mind.

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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2012

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012

Thanks Terry the darkness can come at any time x