My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 140 "5-7-5 (singing in the rain)"All of my poems of release.
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Comment from Georgia333
A funny piece bringing memories of all those people we have listened to through the years who thought they cold sing. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
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A funny piece bringing memories of all those people we have listened to through the years who thought they cold sing. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much for your nice review.
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
Your 5-7-5 is funnier than hell!
You used excellent alliteration with the S & W words.
The art work you used is priceless.
Your satori line is great.
I enjoyed all your lines:
singing in the rain
is where it's said I should be
where no one can hear
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Would I recommend your 5-7-5 fun poem to other reviewrers?
Heck, yes,
Missy.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
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Poet,
Your 5-7-5 is funnier than hell!
You used excellent alliteration with the S & W words.
The art work you used is priceless.
Your satori line is great.
I enjoyed all your lines:
singing in the rain
is where it's said I should be
where no one can hear
I wish you good luck in the contest.
Would I recommend your 5-7-5 fun poem to other reviewrers?
Heck, yes,
Missy.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
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Thank you missy for your excellent review.
Comment from RYME4U
This is good. I love the illustration you picked. The wry humor at the end is well done. I'm always told to sing "solo"- so low that I can't be heard. You did a good job with your 5/7/5 style . Great job!
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This is good. I love the illustration you picked. The wry humor at the end is well done. I'm always told to sing "solo"- so low that I can't be heard. You did a good job with your 5/7/5 style . Great job!
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
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Yes I'm always told to mime too.
Comment from Larissa B
i was doubting to open my FS today... but this 5-7-5 made me forget my brooding mood for a moment;-)
the artwork & your witty poem reminded me of my tone deaf grams..(loved her to pieces... may she rest in peace!)
good luck in the contest!;))
blaze
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i was doubting to open my FS today... but this 5-7-5 made me forget my brooding mood for a moment;-)
the artwork & your witty poem reminded me of my tone deaf grams..(loved her to pieces... may she rest in peace!)
good luck in the contest!;))
blaze
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2012
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Thanks so much blaze, I'm glad it brought a happy memory.
