My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 144 "Tommy's Turkey Trot."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from terry drake
Thanksgiving for Tommy the turkey. He will be proud of his stuffing as he decorates the table. Perhaps not; but your poem was cute and adorned with a good rhyme scheme.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thanksgiving for Tommy the turkey. He will be proud of his stuffing as he decorates the table. Perhaps not; but your poem was cute and adorned with a good rhyme scheme.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hi. Wow, really liked your poem. It was so realistic and enjoyed the imagery of your rhythm. I really wish Tommy would have lived. It sounded great though even though it didn't have such a happy ending. Kind of dark actually, but hey, it really filled my plate this evening to read some really fantastic stuff out there like your writing.
keep it up and thanks for inspiring me as well. Cheers and good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Hi. Wow, really liked your poem. It was so realistic and enjoyed the imagery of your rhythm. I really wish Tommy would have lived. It sounded great though even though it didn't have such a happy ending. Kind of dark actually, but hey, it really filled my plate this evening to read some really fantastic stuff out there like your writing.
keep it up and thanks for inspiring me as well. Cheers and good luck.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Thanks so much for your great review.
Comment from more2write
Really cute! There is not one thing that I would change on your poem. It was just the right level of wording and meter. Good luck on your contest. more2write
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Really cute! There is not one thing that I would change on your poem. It was just the right level of wording and meter. Good luck on your contest. more2write
Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much for your very kind review and rating.
Comment from Terror2s
Your rhymes were unforced and your tale was engaging. This was delightfully to read. The poor Tom Turkey, and I imagine his children will grace some tables this year. T2
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Your rhymes were unforced and your tale was engaging. This was delightfully to read. The poor Tom Turkey, and I imagine his children will grace some tables this year. T2
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Curtis Hatch
This is an excellent children's poem chronicling the fate of Tommy the Turkey. His rational at first, may have been good, but he failed to see where the temptation would lead. With Tommy now fat and well fed, he will taste great with fresh-baked bread. It is an entertaining read.
Well done,
Curtis
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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This is an excellent children's poem chronicling the fate of Tommy the Turkey. His rational at first, may have been good, but he failed to see where the temptation would lead. With Tommy now fat and well fed, he will taste great with fresh-baked bread. It is an entertaining read.
Well done,
Curtis
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2012
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Thank you very much.
