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Viewing comments for Chapter 149 "Friends and Angels."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Very intriguing and enlightning message of hope. I really agree that angels are the new people or everyday strangers we could meet. True friends like angels. Indeed. I feel like I hit a bump when I read, "I feel her presence often, she takes away my fear." I have trouble asssociating gender with angels and I'm not trying to be philisophical. How about, "I feel a presence near, here to take away my fear." Hope this helps. Good luck.
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Very intriguing and enlightning message of hope. I really agree that angels are the new people or everyday strangers we could meet. True friends like angels. Indeed. I feel like I hit a bump when I read, "I feel her presence often, she takes away my fear." I have trouble asssociating gender with angels and I'm not trying to be philisophical. How about, "I feel a presence near, here to take away my fear." Hope this helps. Good luck.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Thank you Benjamin, that does sound better :) Jaq x
Comment from santapola
Hello there, what a sweet little write this is and I am happy to see you have a faith. Love the idea of a feather falling to earth show s you are not alone. Well done.
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Hello there, what a sweet little write this is and I am happy to see you have a faith. Love the idea of a feather falling to earth show s you are not alone. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
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Many thanks Santapola for your kind words. :) Jaq x
Comment from TammyGail
Jaq Cee what a beautiful poem this was indeed - so very touching and heartfelt - you've such a wonderful way of expressing and always so it well in your scribe - thanks for sharing pleasure it was
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Jaq Cee what a beautiful poem this was indeed - so very touching and heartfelt - you've such a wonderful way of expressing and always so it well in your scribe - thanks for sharing pleasure it was
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
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Thank you Tammy it means a lot my friend. :) Jaq x
Comment from STEPHEN007
Wow very good Jaq. I like the way you've expressed yourself because what you say is so true because good friends are only few and they say that faith can move mountains.Nice work and keep on writing. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Wow very good Jaq. I like the way you've expressed yourself because what you say is so true because good friends are only few and they say that faith can move mountains.Nice work and keep on writing. Have a great day.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
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Thanks for your lovely words Stephen. :) Jaq x
Comment from Scribbler67
What a lovely, heart-warming and encouraging poem!
It has a very comforting rhythm and good meter, while the careful rhyming makes this a poem to remember.
Most enjoyable.
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What a lovely, heart-warming and encouraging poem!
It has a very comforting rhythm and good meter, while the careful rhyming makes this a poem to remember.
Most enjoyable.
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
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Thank you Scribbler for your kind review. :) Jaq x
Comment from Chris Tee
This is an absolutely sweet and serene piece of poetry. You indeed show appreciation for this friend and guardian angel in your life. Well done with this excellent poem.
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This is an absolutely sweet and serene piece of poetry. You indeed show appreciation for this friend and guardian angel in your life. Well done with this excellent poem.
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Comment Written 03-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2012
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Thanks for your lovely review Chris, much appreciated from you. :) Jaq x
