My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 154 "Thoughts Awry."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Wow!!! Reading your poem, I was mesmerized by the sheer voice behind your words. I felt I was going down a slide and falling into a pool of warm water especially with the way you ended with sleep tonight. The flow was very deep. Good luck and keep writing. Thanks for inspiring me with your words.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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Wow!!! Reading your poem, I was mesmerized by the sheer voice behind your words. I felt I was going down a slide and falling into a pool of warm water especially with the way you ended with sleep tonight. The flow was very deep. Good luck and keep writing. Thanks for inspiring me with your words.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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Benjamin thank you so much for your very kind rating and great review. Glad you liked it. :) Jaq x
