senyru(silver snowflakes fall)
senyru something you love16 total reviews
Comment from juliedickson55
Nice look at winter's kiss of feathery light snow, yes...kissing the cheeks, turning them rosy. Catching flakes on the tongue, patting the snowballs in mittened hands, huddling in the completed snow fort, pretending the snow creature outside the opening, yelling for siblings thundering down snow covered hills on coasters.
Nice 5-7-5 senryu of winter.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2012
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Nice look at winter's kiss of feathery light snow, yes...kissing the cheeks, turning them rosy. Catching flakes on the tongue, patting the snowballs in mittened hands, huddling in the completed snow fort, pretending the snow creature outside the opening, yelling for siblings thundering down snow covered hills on coasters.
Nice 5-7-5 senryu of winter.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much, Julie. A really beautiful review as always. You create quite a picture yourself. LOL
Comment from Gungalo
Awesome senryu you. So many ways to say I love you yet this one comes as a bit of a surprise. Wonderful imagery in this one.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Awesome senryu you. So many ways to say I love you yet this one comes as a bit of a surprise. Wonderful imagery in this one.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Thank you, buddyo of warmth. I know cold kisses are not your "thing" so appreciate your kind review.
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Smile.
Comment from Eternal Muse
A beautiful poem. It sounds more like a haiku to me because of its nature references and the general appeal. A gorgeous fun picture to accompany. Your poem is so yummy, makes me yearn for the winter.
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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A beautiful poem. It sounds more like a haiku to me because of its nature references and the general appeal. A gorgeous fun picture to accompany. Your poem is so yummy, makes me yearn for the winter.
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Oh, thank you so much. I wanted the reader to remember this "first" snow fall of the year, and how magical it is.
Comment from Dodey
This is just perfect..Wonderful choice of words that bring ( crystal ) clear imagery of the frosty snow kisses and your love affair with Winter. Each line perfect to the next..Bravo my friend.
Very Best Wishes for The Contest..
One of the best I've read....Kind Regards...Dee
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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This is just perfect..Wonderful choice of words that bring ( crystal ) clear imagery of the frosty snow kisses and your love affair with Winter. Each line perfect to the next..Bravo my friend.
Very Best Wishes for The Contest..
One of the best I've read....Kind Regards...Dee
Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much, Dee. This is a great review. Hugs
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My pleasure my friend..Kind Regards to you..Dee
Comment from wordsareus
This is a lovely poem for the Senryu Contest. I love snowflakes too and you certainly did a great job describing them in so few words.
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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This is a lovely poem for the Senryu Contest. I love snowflakes too and you certainly did a great job describing them in so few words.
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Thank you so much
Comment from terry drake
Your senryu poem salutes the winter season in a three line poem that qualifies for the 5-7-5 syllable count challenge. Congratulations and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Your senryu poem salutes the winter season in a three line poem that qualifies for the 5-7-5 syllable count challenge. Congratulations and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2012
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Thank you, Terry