My Life in words
Viewing comments for Chapter 167 "Hapless Thief."All of my poems of release.
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Comment from kiwisteveh
Cujo, really - I don't see how even Stephen King could have turned that tiny little beast into an object of terror.
I enjoyed the humour in your poem and the ending was a nice segue back to the prompt topic. The meter started off strong but got a little loose later - doesn't really matter, I suppose.
Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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Cujo, really - I don't see how even Stephen King could have turned that tiny little beast into an object of terror.
I enjoyed the humour in your poem and the ending was a nice segue back to the prompt topic. The meter started off strong but got a little loose later - doesn't really matter, I suppose.
Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2012
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It was just a bit of fun with the Cujo reference. Thanks for your kind review.
